Post by Sheogorath on Oct 22, 2007 0:22:50 GMT -5
I promised my fellow Azuki shippers an Azuki fic, and here it is, Responsive. I normally wouldn't write a story such as this one on a site such as this one for two reasons. First, because though I'm holding back to make this as suitable as possible, and though I don't do anything explicit, it's still a little mature for a large number of our members. And secondly, because Azuki is a dificult ship to write a story for and keep it clean. That said, this story is as clean an Azuki fic as I can come up with. If you are offended by girl-girl sensuality, I highly suggest you navigate away from this story, even if you are an Azuki shipper. That said, I rate this story a PG-13 for female sensuality.
Responsive
by Joshua R. Workman a.k.a. Nerull
Chapter 1: Submission
She hadn't been deprived of light, or food, or human interaction, or even the right to relieve herself, but Suki had been deprived of something that had been eating her alive since her defeat and capture at the hands of Azula: physical contact. Under Azula's orders, Suki was to be brought food three times a day and released to eat, as well as to relieve herself as needed, and she had regular visits from one or two of the other Kyoshi warriors for about an hour each time so that she wouldn't go crazy, but Azula had decreed that Suki not be touched. She considered her bondage tolerable, even pleasant, except for that. What she would have given to hug someone or fight, or something, so long as she got to touch someone, or they touched her, but Azula wouldn't have it.
It continued like this for days, at first, then weeks, now a month had passed that Suki had been Azula's prisoner. Every day, three times each, at about the same time each day, a girl would bring her food and unchain her so she could eat. At times, random intervals between visits, the same girl would come and ask her if she needed to use the rest room. And every now and again, the girl would come with one of the Kyoshi warriors for a visit, or she herself would stay and talk for about an hour. Suki had gotten used to it, and had even become friends with the girl, whose name was Konna, and they were about the same age.
One day, Konna had brought news to Suki that Azula was planning a visit.
"What do you think she wants?" Suki asked, not bothering to be quiet as few people passed this way this deep into the dungeons.
"I don't know," Konna answered, "All I know is that Princess Azula is planning to visit you sometime in the next few weeks. I'll let you know the day before I expect her to come and visit you and tell you what I know about it."
"Alright," Suki said, her head lowered slightly, in thought. "Thank you, Konna."
Konna smiled. "You're welcome, Suki. Well, my hour's about up, so I should be going. I'll talk to you later."
The two girls said their goodbyes, and Konna left the cell, locking the door behind her, leaving Suki once again alone.
Azula had ordered Suki be chained to the wall, rather than be allowed to move about her cell as other prisoners were. For a few nights, Suki couldn't sleep and instead slept during the day when she could, but eventually, she had grown used to the chains and had developed a rather dependable sleep routine.
Two weeks passed, and still no word of Azula's visit from Konna. One day, however, Konna told Suki that she suspected Azula would be visiting the next day, saying something about, "The time being right to check."
Konna left that day, her customary smile in place, but not before telling Suki to be wary of whatever it was Azula was planning to do.
The next day, Azula visited, just as Konna had said she would.
Suki noticed something about Azula the moment she had entered her cell: she was wearing a robe similar to the kind a person would wear to bed. How odd she thought that she should come wearing a robe and her hair down. What could she be up to?
"I can see you're wondering why I've come to visit you dressed this way," Azula said as she sauntered over to where Suki was chained to the wall. "I don't really see any reason to tell you that."
Azula knealt down in front of Suki and gazed into her eyes for a long moment without saying or doing anything else. Eventually, however, she reached out her hand and parted the robe she had ordered Suki be dressed in, and touched bare flesh at her hip.
Suki's hips involuntarily thrust themselves out at Azula's slightest touch. How good it felt to be touched! How long had it been since she last felt contact with someone? She didn't know, and she didn't care, she was being touched again, and that's all she cared about.
Azula withdrew her hand, and Suki couldn't stop herself from protesting. "No, please!" she gasped the moment Azula released her, her voice thick with desperation. "Please, don't stop!"
A wicked smile crossed Azula's face then. Excellent she thought to herself. It's going just as I hoped it would. Not that there was ever any real doubt it would. Deprive a person physical contact with another person for a time, and they become your puppet at the slightest touch. To Suki, she said, "My, you seem desperate to be touched, even by another girl."
Suki was shocked. It was true! She didn't want to admit it, but what Azula had said just then was true. She didn't realize it at first, just how desperate she had become to feel the touch of another person. Now she realized it, and it was too late. Any resistance she might have put up as Konna had bid her had fluttered away the moment Azula touched her. She was Azula's puppet now, and she wouldn't try anything, if it meant she would touch her again.
"No! It's not that! I-" Suki tried to protest, but it was a futile effort, as Azula touched her again, and her hips flew out once again.
Azula laughed at Suki as she placed her other hand on the bound girl's other hip and began to rub them both. Eventually, Azula removed one hand, and ran the other up Suki's side, around her back and up to the back of her neck, sending tremors of pleasure coursing through her body and causing her neck to involuntarily snap back and catch Azula's hand.
This is what Azula had been waiting for. She leaned into Suki, their bodies meeting, her hand still to the back of the bound girl's neck, and she began kissing Suki's neck at the front and side.
An involuntary sigh excaped Suki's lips as Azula kissed her neck. Azula noticed this, and stopped kissing Suki long enough to say, "Admit it. You like it, and you don't want me to stop." Another sigh escaped Suki's lips, and she said, "Yes. I'll do anything you want. Just please, don't stop." Azula smiled again, and kissed Suki on the lips then.
A while later, Azula left the cell, leaving Suki once again alone, but not without a word. Suki had wanted to hear Azula say what she said, and had forced herself to remember them after she left.
"Yes, just as I thought. I knew you wouldn't resist. You're mine now, and I won't let you go. I'll continue to let no one else touch you, if it means you so willingly submit to me. I'll be back in a week. I know you'll be ready for more by then."
And there you have it. My Azuki fic, Responsive. I did post a warning about it, and offered up what I felt a suitable rating for the content of the story. If it's inappropriate, I apologize, but I did hold back. Remember that. I may make it multi chapter if it survives, but at the moment, I can't really think of anything else to add for it. Stay tuned, as I may very well come back with something to add to it.
Cheap pop/shameless plug: Visit the Azuki Pride Parade for more info and chat about Azuki.
Responsive
by Joshua R. Workman a.k.a. Nerull
Chapter 1: Submission
She hadn't been deprived of light, or food, or human interaction, or even the right to relieve herself, but Suki had been deprived of something that had been eating her alive since her defeat and capture at the hands of Azula: physical contact. Under Azula's orders, Suki was to be brought food three times a day and released to eat, as well as to relieve herself as needed, and she had regular visits from one or two of the other Kyoshi warriors for about an hour each time so that she wouldn't go crazy, but Azula had decreed that Suki not be touched. She considered her bondage tolerable, even pleasant, except for that. What she would have given to hug someone or fight, or something, so long as she got to touch someone, or they touched her, but Azula wouldn't have it.
It continued like this for days, at first, then weeks, now a month had passed that Suki had been Azula's prisoner. Every day, three times each, at about the same time each day, a girl would bring her food and unchain her so she could eat. At times, random intervals between visits, the same girl would come and ask her if she needed to use the rest room. And every now and again, the girl would come with one of the Kyoshi warriors for a visit, or she herself would stay and talk for about an hour. Suki had gotten used to it, and had even become friends with the girl, whose name was Konna, and they were about the same age.
One day, Konna had brought news to Suki that Azula was planning a visit.
"What do you think she wants?" Suki asked, not bothering to be quiet as few people passed this way this deep into the dungeons.
"I don't know," Konna answered, "All I know is that Princess Azula is planning to visit you sometime in the next few weeks. I'll let you know the day before I expect her to come and visit you and tell you what I know about it."
"Alright," Suki said, her head lowered slightly, in thought. "Thank you, Konna."
Konna smiled. "You're welcome, Suki. Well, my hour's about up, so I should be going. I'll talk to you later."
The two girls said their goodbyes, and Konna left the cell, locking the door behind her, leaving Suki once again alone.
Azula had ordered Suki be chained to the wall, rather than be allowed to move about her cell as other prisoners were. For a few nights, Suki couldn't sleep and instead slept during the day when she could, but eventually, she had grown used to the chains and had developed a rather dependable sleep routine.
Two weeks passed, and still no word of Azula's visit from Konna. One day, however, Konna told Suki that she suspected Azula would be visiting the next day, saying something about, "The time being right to check."
Konna left that day, her customary smile in place, but not before telling Suki to be wary of whatever it was Azula was planning to do.
The next day, Azula visited, just as Konna had said she would.
Suki noticed something about Azula the moment she had entered her cell: she was wearing a robe similar to the kind a person would wear to bed. How odd she thought that she should come wearing a robe and her hair down. What could she be up to?
"I can see you're wondering why I've come to visit you dressed this way," Azula said as she sauntered over to where Suki was chained to the wall. "I don't really see any reason to tell you that."
Azula knealt down in front of Suki and gazed into her eyes for a long moment without saying or doing anything else. Eventually, however, she reached out her hand and parted the robe she had ordered Suki be dressed in, and touched bare flesh at her hip.
Suki's hips involuntarily thrust themselves out at Azula's slightest touch. How good it felt to be touched! How long had it been since she last felt contact with someone? She didn't know, and she didn't care, she was being touched again, and that's all she cared about.
Azula withdrew her hand, and Suki couldn't stop herself from protesting. "No, please!" she gasped the moment Azula released her, her voice thick with desperation. "Please, don't stop!"
A wicked smile crossed Azula's face then. Excellent she thought to herself. It's going just as I hoped it would. Not that there was ever any real doubt it would. Deprive a person physical contact with another person for a time, and they become your puppet at the slightest touch. To Suki, she said, "My, you seem desperate to be touched, even by another girl."
Suki was shocked. It was true! She didn't want to admit it, but what Azula had said just then was true. She didn't realize it at first, just how desperate she had become to feel the touch of another person. Now she realized it, and it was too late. Any resistance she might have put up as Konna had bid her had fluttered away the moment Azula touched her. She was Azula's puppet now, and she wouldn't try anything, if it meant she would touch her again.
"No! It's not that! I-" Suki tried to protest, but it was a futile effort, as Azula touched her again, and her hips flew out once again.
Azula laughed at Suki as she placed her other hand on the bound girl's other hip and began to rub them both. Eventually, Azula removed one hand, and ran the other up Suki's side, around her back and up to the back of her neck, sending tremors of pleasure coursing through her body and causing her neck to involuntarily snap back and catch Azula's hand.
This is what Azula had been waiting for. She leaned into Suki, their bodies meeting, her hand still to the back of the bound girl's neck, and she began kissing Suki's neck at the front and side.
An involuntary sigh excaped Suki's lips as Azula kissed her neck. Azula noticed this, and stopped kissing Suki long enough to say, "Admit it. You like it, and you don't want me to stop." Another sigh escaped Suki's lips, and she said, "Yes. I'll do anything you want. Just please, don't stop." Azula smiled again, and kissed Suki on the lips then.
A while later, Azula left the cell, leaving Suki once again alone, but not without a word. Suki had wanted to hear Azula say what she said, and had forced herself to remember them after she left.
"Yes, just as I thought. I knew you wouldn't resist. You're mine now, and I won't let you go. I'll continue to let no one else touch you, if it means you so willingly submit to me. I'll be back in a week. I know you'll be ready for more by then."
And there you have it. My Azuki fic, Responsive. I did post a warning about it, and offered up what I felt a suitable rating for the content of the story. If it's inappropriate, I apologize, but I did hold back. Remember that. I may make it multi chapter if it survives, but at the moment, I can't really think of anything else to add for it. Stay tuned, as I may very well come back with something to add to it.
Cheap pop/shameless plug: Visit the Azuki Pride Parade for more info and chat about Azuki.