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Post by avatariaxxxmari on Jan 6, 2007 12:23:40 GMT -5
A glistening desire that echo's in your eyes, A truthful love that never tells lies.
A glance so beautiful it tendered my soul, Without you, I would be lost, never again whole.
A quiet whisper enlightens my days, As I love you so much in so many ways.
Even if it was all just a simple kiss on the cheek, Or every word you motion just to softly speak.
You'll remain in my heart for life, forever, As we will soar one day, above the horizons together.
You showed me true love without a default, Every smile you make leaves my mind in a halt.
All the memories will last from day on to night, As you are the sun that brings me my light.
Out of the darkness, I found out what was true, That no matter what happens, I'll always love you.
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Post by avatrshay on Jan 6, 2007 12:30:36 GMT -5
*Aplauds* I really like it!
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Post by avatariaxxxmari on Jan 6, 2007 12:32:49 GMT -5
^ Thanks! ;D
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Post by avatrshay on Jan 6, 2007 12:35:05 GMT -5
*Toss hair* Your welcome!
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Melis
Long Feng
hay baby wanna get away on my bison?
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Post by Melis on Jan 6, 2007 12:40:08 GMT -5
Wow! *3* That was b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l. *Karma*
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Post by frozenwind141 on Jan 6, 2007 12:43:05 GMT -5
Fantastic! Loved it to bits ;D
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Post by avatariaxxxmari on Jan 6, 2007 12:43:48 GMT -5
^^ Thanks so much!
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Post by Mystic Katt on Jan 6, 2007 20:24:30 GMT -5
Wondrous. ;D I wish I could write poetry as well as you.
*pouts*
Seriously, though, that was awesome.
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Post by avatariaxxxmari on Jan 6, 2007 23:22:48 GMT -5
^ Thanks so much! I appreciate it, and Im sure you can, just practice ^^
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