Post by Jenny Lee on Dec 23, 2006 20:10:59 GMT -5
Victory
Azula was walking down the hallway in the Fire Nation's Royal Palace. Red Fire Nation insignias draped over the walls. Azula then spotted her older brother walking down the hallway, coming from the hallway with a grin on his face.
"What are you so happy about Zuzu?" Azula teased. Instead of an angry retort, Zuko just continued walking down the hallway, smirking.
"What is he up to?" Azula wondered suspiciously. Then, it hit her. This hallway eventually led to her room, in the same direction Zuko was walking from. As quickly as she could, Azula ran to her room.
Zuko could hear his sister's angry screams as she looked around her room. Laughing, Zuko just leaned against a tree and waited for his sister to come rushing outside.
"You're dead!" Azula screamed at Zuko. Zuko just stood there, hands behind his back, trying to look as innocent as possible. Azula prepared to shoot a fireball at Zuko, but as soon as her hands created flames, Zuko took out the bucket of water he'd been hiding behind his back.
Azula was soaked. She just stood in shock for a moment. A look of pure rage then crossed over her face. She leapt at Zuko, but he was too quick. Zuko had already begun to run across the Palace Courtyard. Azula was right behind him.
Zuko fled down the hallways, trying to avoid the fire his sister shot at him. Soon, Zuko reached his room. He bolted inside and locked the door behind him. He could hear her gasping for breath and pounding on the door. A brief flash of light could be seen as Azula through a fireball at the door. After a scream of rage, Azula stormed back down the hallway.
Zuko smiled to himself. It was a victory. A small victory, but a victory all the same.
This is my first fanfic. I'm still in the middle of writing a longer one, though. I hope you like it!
Azula was walking down the hallway in the Fire Nation's Royal Palace. Red Fire Nation insignias draped over the walls. Azula then spotted her older brother walking down the hallway, coming from the hallway with a grin on his face.
"What are you so happy about Zuzu?" Azula teased. Instead of an angry retort, Zuko just continued walking down the hallway, smirking.
"What is he up to?" Azula wondered suspiciously. Then, it hit her. This hallway eventually led to her room, in the same direction Zuko was walking from. As quickly as she could, Azula ran to her room.
Zuko could hear his sister's angry screams as she looked around her room. Laughing, Zuko just leaned against a tree and waited for his sister to come rushing outside.
"You're dead!" Azula screamed at Zuko. Zuko just stood there, hands behind his back, trying to look as innocent as possible. Azula prepared to shoot a fireball at Zuko, but as soon as her hands created flames, Zuko took out the bucket of water he'd been hiding behind his back.
Azula was soaked. She just stood in shock for a moment. A look of pure rage then crossed over her face. She leapt at Zuko, but he was too quick. Zuko had already begun to run across the Palace Courtyard. Azula was right behind him.
Zuko fled down the hallways, trying to avoid the fire his sister shot at him. Soon, Zuko reached his room. He bolted inside and locked the door behind him. He could hear her gasping for breath and pounding on the door. A brief flash of light could be seen as Azula through a fireball at the door. After a scream of rage, Azula stormed back down the hallway.
Zuko smiled to himself. It was a victory. A small victory, but a victory all the same.
This is my first fanfic. I'm still in the middle of writing a longer one, though. I hope you like it!
I assume that the setting is when the siblings are children, but you should mention the time period if the story does not take place in Avatar's main time. It is very good very good for your first fanfic, and I look forward to reading your longer one!
