Post by Time Bandit on Oct 28, 2006 18:19:22 GMT -5
please don't be harsh this is my first one (by the way Tio is a character i made for the fanfic) (pronounced Tie-oh)
the wind whipped Aang and the two siblings but they pushed on toward the glowing water city. They fashioned into a run and as soon as they reached the glowing city yet another distraction came to them as a giant ice wall appeared from the floor it was water bending. A figure jumped up onto the ice. "Don't go any further" he shouted. The boy was about Katara's age, he had jet black hair and sharp green eye's. Katara stared at him as though in a wonderful dream. "Why should we, we crossed half the world to get here!" Aang and Sokka shouted in unison. Katara was still in her dreamy state watching the boy and not shouting like she normally would be, but she would eventualy. She was in love but after a minute or so showed no more signs of it. "They wouldn't let you in even if you tried." the boy shouted "And why is that!" Aang shouted. "The fire benders took over the city" the boy shouted softer than the last time as he noticed Katara staring at him. "Wait a second" he shouted "your the avatar!" he said and jumped down to there level. "you can save the city" he said again. He noticed Katara staring at him still the dreamy state wiped from her face when she noticed he'd been watching her. The boy cleared his throat "Is she OK" he said gesturing to Katara. "She'll be fine" Sokka remarked. "so what's your name." Aang said quickly changing the subject. "I'm Tio, a water bending master... well almost, my master was killed by fire benders." he said , Katara's dreamful state was still gone and turned to curiosity. "I'm a master i could teach you."she said quickly. "Sure." Tio said "" Katara said quickly. he agreed and the two walked into a door to the left without saying a word to Aang and Sokka who stood there jaws dropped that Katara after a day or so be able to control them with the wave of a hand. Aang jumped up on top of the building and looked through a hole in the roof and saw Katara and Tio. Aang was wacthing them carfully. When he was about too get up and jump down Tio hit Katara around the head and she was out cold, than he tied her up and ran out of the back door
Aang fell backward and told Sokka what he had seen
and walked away.
The next day Katara was missing, Aang and Sokka knew where she was and knew that Tio was just acting. For a 14 year old he was quite the actor. But Aang Sokka played a long and acted as they had known nothing about Tio's terrible act. After a 30 min search Tio dissapeared. "Come on Sokka!" Aang shouted "We have to find her!" Aang was shouting because he thought Tio might be watching. There was a slite puase and then Sokka spoke. "I don't know it seems quieter when she's gone i kind of like it." Sokka said in a tone wich said he was lying. Aang hit him and the day draged on. They sprinted to were Katara was and un-tied her.
They found Tio talking to some fire benders in the city. At least he had told the truth about something.
;D hope u injoyed it (took me ages im a slow typer) I'll try and make a part 2 i got a good cliff hanger for part 2
;D ;D ;D
post up opinions please!!! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
the wind whipped Aang and the two siblings but they pushed on toward the glowing water city. They fashioned into a run and as soon as they reached the glowing city yet another distraction came to them as a giant ice wall appeared from the floor it was water bending. A figure jumped up onto the ice. "Don't go any further" he shouted. The boy was about Katara's age, he had jet black hair and sharp green eye's. Katara stared at him as though in a wonderful dream. "Why should we, we crossed half the world to get here!" Aang and Sokka shouted in unison. Katara was still in her dreamy state watching the boy and not shouting like she normally would be, but she would eventualy. She was in love but after a minute or so showed no more signs of it. "They wouldn't let you in even if you tried." the boy shouted "And why is that!" Aang shouted. "The fire benders took over the city" the boy shouted softer than the last time as he noticed Katara staring at him. "Wait a second" he shouted "your the avatar!" he said and jumped down to there level. "you can save the city" he said again. He noticed Katara staring at him still the dreamy state wiped from her face when she noticed he'd been watching her. The boy cleared his throat "Is she OK" he said gesturing to Katara. "She'll be fine" Sokka remarked. "so what's your name." Aang said quickly changing the subject. "I'm Tio, a water bending master... well almost, my master was killed by fire benders." he said , Katara's dreamful state was still gone and turned to curiosity. "I'm a master i could teach you."she said quickly. "Sure." Tio said "" Katara said quickly. he agreed and the two walked into a door to the left without saying a word to Aang and Sokka who stood there jaws dropped that Katara after a day or so be able to control them with the wave of a hand. Aang jumped up on top of the building and looked through a hole in the roof and saw Katara and Tio. Aang was wacthing them carfully. When he was about too get up and jump down Tio hit Katara around the head and she was out cold, than he tied her up and ran out of the back door
Aang fell backward and told Sokka what he had seen
and walked away.
The next day Katara was missing, Aang and Sokka knew where she was and knew that Tio was just acting. For a 14 year old he was quite the actor. But Aang Sokka played a long and acted as they had known nothing about Tio's terrible act. After a 30 min search Tio dissapeared. "Come on Sokka!" Aang shouted "We have to find her!" Aang was shouting because he thought Tio might be watching. There was a slite puase and then Sokka spoke. "I don't know it seems quieter when she's gone i kind of like it." Sokka said in a tone wich said he was lying. Aang hit him and the day draged on. They sprinted to were Katara was and un-tied her.
They found Tio talking to some fire benders in the city. At least he had told the truth about something.
;D hope u injoyed it (took me ages im a slow typer) I'll try and make a part 2 i got a good cliff hanger for part 2
;D ;D ;D
post up opinions please!!! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D