Post by Time Bandit on Oct 29, 2006 6:29:04 GMT -5
It was Zuko.
"It's time pesant." The prince said
he sounded sure of him self. I coughed again and cursed under my voice, He helped me up and i managed to shove him away without falling over.
"Help!" I shouted in hope that Aang or any of the gang would here me and come to my rescue but no such thing happened. Zuco covered my mouth and dicided to gag me.
"Shut up" he hissed he grabed my arm and draged me away. I could still here Zuko's uncle Iroh snoring in the distance.
A large trap had been set up and he shoved me to the floor, I landed on my face again but this time my nose started to bleed. I tryed to shout again but it was muffled by the cloth Zuko had gaged me with.
"Don't try anything stupid or you might get hurt." Zuko said in a moking tone I knew what he meant and I Decided to obey.
Post by Time Bandit on Oct 30, 2006 12:49:05 GMT -5
is any one gonna continue, Not yet ok me continue again
I laid there, alone, hungry. but I kept my hopes up for the best. My had stopped bleeding by now but dryed blood covered my nose and lips. Zuko came back and dragged me up. He dragged me into the tent again, sat me down and pulled out a knife with the fire nation insignea on it. He started to scrach my face with the knife. I was squrming and wincing in pain. A tear shed it's way down my face. Zuko saw this tear, I couldn't help but notice the slitest bit of sorrow in his eye's. But he continued to scrach my face with the knife. He stopped with the knife and put it down on a table, he grabbed a cloth and babbed the blood with it spreding it around my face. He once again dragged me up and walked me past the trap toward the Aang's camp. I started to hear faint voices of Aang and Sokka calling me name. I tryed to call back to them but remembered i was gagged ang bound so i did'nt bother with it and just waited wile he dragged me away, his golden eye's gleaming with confidence.
ok, i'm new to this site. i'll give it my all. btw, i have a Nick.com Z/K so i'm not new to writing! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
And he tripped. Not so much to bring him down, but enough to make him take a few side-steps. That's when the ground started rumbling beneath us. He looked around, bewildered. His eyes seemed to scream out fear that he held in. That was it, we fell. The ground gave way and we plumetted down to the earth beneath.
Although it wasn't a fall drop, only about 10 or so feet, it still did enough damage to hurt. A tear trickled down my face from landing on my ankle the wrong way. For a moment, I wondered to myself, what happened to Zuko? I shook the thought, me caring about Zuko? Yeah right! Still, I couldn't help but to look over in his direction.
Just like I had, he legs bent backwards in a painful way. I thought that he was unconscious or something, seeing as he hadn't moved. In a few moments, he let out a low groan. As if it were instict, he released the gag that burnt the corners of my mouth.
"So, peasant," he began in an ornary tone, "great job. You just managed to ruin both of our days!"
I spit at the ground, trying to rid the taste of blood and dirt. "Shut it, Zuko!" I snapped.
He almost looked surprised to see me retaliate that way. Zuko began to glance over his bent legs. "At least they're not broken," I heard him mumble to himself. "Well, you're lucky that little tumble twisted my ankle, otherwise you would have been pretty much dead. I take it that you hurt yourself even more, meaning it's gonna take even longer to get outa here."
The pit may have been a good 13 feet on both sides, but even that amount of space seemed to be to close to him for my own comfort. Then, he moved towards me. He pulled himself over slowly, never looking up. And what he did next shocked me. For him to do that? I could never imagine. He. . .
~~~~~ hopefully i can check this out later. until then. this girl is GONE!
I tried really hard to get where I'm at, but was it enough? Be fierce like fire and smooth like water. Be like Yin and Yang. Tui and Lah. Peace in my own mind.
Post by Time Bandit on Nov 5, 2006 12:33:39 GMT -5
i'll continue doogie 117 i couldn't understand the last bit of ur story so it might not fit with the end of yours.
He helped me up from the floor "Are you ok" He said The big hole were they had fallen clossed up He swore and asked again "Are you ok" Zuko said "why are you helping me" Katara said "I'm not going to die here alone." he said "My father has ready banished me, my mothers dissarperants, it makes me fell alone." he continued "thats the same as my family, my mums dead and my dad well no one knows." she said "It's a lonly feeling isn't it." Zuko sighed. "yeah." Katara sighed She sat down next to Zuko who had slumped down to the floor. " it makes me feel lonely not being with my family." he said "you have your uncle" Katara said quickly "not any more now that were down here" he said "and don't you have your brother whats his name." he and started guessing names "Sokka" She said quickly "Thats it." he said Katara shuffled closer to the prince, it was cold and there were no exits so noone would see, unless a random earthbender rushed to the rescue. "your not as bad as i thought pesant." He said "your not so bad yourself Zuko" she said getting closer to the prince. He didn't look uncomftible with her doing this. "Every one has disires like my self i have secret disires." Zuko said. Katara was startled as she didn't understand him. Zuko shuffled closer to her grabbed the back of her head and kissed her. She didn't back away in disgust like he thought she would but just kissed him back with a suprised look on her face. He stopped and turned around embarest. "I'm sorry" Zuko "Don't be i liked that kiss." Katara said "belive it or not that kiss with you was one of my disires" she said.