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Post by longshotsgirl58 on Jan 3, 2007 16:02:36 GMT -5
Welcome ! Glad I could help!
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historyman12
Fugitive Iroh
IS IT JULY 14TH YET?
Posts: 4,822
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Post by historyman12 on Jan 3, 2007 17:00:58 GMT -5
Okay, guys, here it is (I hope your happy ZuZu fangirl) Zuko was walking alonghis ships deck like he always was, thinking about finding the avatar and going home. He wondered if he would ever find a bride and abou that one ttalk uncle gave him when he was 8 and it freaked him out. Anything like that he was impervious to now, it didn't matter what it was.
"Zuko, would you mind coming with me for a moment?"
"Oh, fine Uncle"
They walked into Zuko's private chambers and uncle began his speech
"You know the talk I gaveyou when youwerewere 8 about your wife and what will evantually happen right?"
"Uh-huh."
"Well,you see, there is whole other level to that that I didn't go into then, butI think you're old enough for now."
"and?"
"Well, you see,when the people are having..."
About three minutes later:
Zuko walked out oftheroom with hisface stark white. That new sex talk was freaky. He was dead nervous about his bride now. what if she was a domme? What if she was a sub? What if something went wrong and she waskinky and he wasn't?
When the one female slave on the ship walkedup to himheshouted "no,I won't go be your sub! Never! That should be you! Slaves should never be dominatrixes!"
When a male walked up to him he rambled about never being in an M/M relationship.
"Uncle, remind never to get married and produce any heirs"
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Post by MasterEcabob on Jan 3, 2007 17:58:46 GMT -5
Well it looks like someone needs to learn to proofread their work before posting it . . .
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Post by longshotsgirl58 on Jan 3, 2007 19:37:36 GMT -5
Well it looks like someone needs to learn to proofread their work before posting it . . . Yes agreed ... but it was pretty good ... A little hard to understand
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Jenny Lee
Ba Sing Se Azula
Icon by me, sig by Catalyst
Posts: 2,765
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Post by Jenny Lee on Jan 3, 2007 20:03:37 GMT -5
How old is Zuko supposed to be in the story?
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Post by frozenwind141 on Jan 5, 2007 9:24:04 GMT -5
Pretty good!
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historyman12
Fugitive Iroh
IS IT JULY 14TH YET?
Posts: 4,822
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Post by historyman12 on Jan 5, 2007 17:08:33 GMT -5
Jenny: 16, in avatar chasing mode, on his ship.
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Jenny Lee
Ba Sing Se Azula
Icon by me, sig by Catalyst
Posts: 2,765
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Post by Jenny Lee on Jan 5, 2007 20:28:59 GMT -5
^0.o Okay, thanks.
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Post by firefists101 on Jan 5, 2007 22:07:50 GMT -5
Not too bad! But the proofreading could use some work....it was kind of hard to understand...but overall I rate it a 8/10!!!!
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Post by Mystic Katt on Jan 6, 2007 20:27:54 GMT -5
I won't bother to point out that you should give it a once-over, because everyone already has.
So I will just say: I love it. Absolutely hilarious ;D
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masterab
Appa
Band Geeks Rule. And Yes We Are A Colt.
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Post by masterab on Jan 7, 2007 16:10:45 GMT -5
I read this thing yesterday. masterwb showed it to me! I Laughed hardcore.
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zukoxme
Agni Kai Aang
Rabid Zuko Fangirl
Posts: 7,769
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Post by zukoxme on Jan 8, 2007 8:06:16 GMT -5
Oh man, this mand me ROTFL.
Can someone make a story about Zuzu getting the talk when he was 8?
Iroh: We need to talk. Zuko: Okay One hour later.. Zuko: How old do I have to be? Iroh: At least 16. Zuko: It's a good thing I don't have fangirls.. Hehehe.. Iroh: Um... Zuko: ... Zuko: I need a condom.
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Post by firefists101 on Jan 8, 2007 16:55:47 GMT -5
^^LOL that's awesome!
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Post by longshotsgirl58 on Jan 27, 2007 21:01:42 GMT -5
Oh man, this mand me ROTFL. Can someone make a story about Zuzu getting the talk when he was 8? Iroh: We need to talk. Zuko: Okay One hour later..Zuko: How old do I have to be? Iroh: At least 16. Zuko: It's a good thing I don't have fangirls.. Hehehe.. Iroh: Um... Zuko: ... Zuko: I need a condom. LoL! Thats Good!
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