Kyatto
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Post by Kyatto on Feb 22, 2007 6:47:12 GMT -5
Title: "Just An Ordinary Girl" Author: Kyatto Rating: PG-13 Genre: Alternate Universe (Real World), Romance, Humor, Drama Pairings: Zuko/Katara (main), Aang/Katara (also main but not as prominent). Others brought up but are not the primary focus: Zuko/Aang, Sokka/Toph Summary: Katara is an average girl with an average life. The only special things hapen to her by chance. However her life turns upside down when she wins the contest of a century...The chance to spend a week with the famous Prince Zuko! Notes: It's all explained in the story but I'll just give some brief details. In this Aang is fourteen so just age everyone two years in your mind and you're all set! Have fun and enjoy! (I know I don't normally write Het. Gasp!) Chapter One: Ordinary Girls Are Not PrincessesHope you all like it!
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Kyatto
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Post by Kyatto on Feb 22, 2007 12:39:28 GMT -5
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Ilise
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Post by Ilise on Feb 22, 2007 19:52:28 GMT -5
WOW! Please, please update? This is magnificent! The idea is wonnnderful! I spotted NO GRAMMAR MISTAKES! *hyperventilating* And best of all... the Zutara is REALISTIC. He started off arrogant and snotty- his characterization is PERFECT! I shall be bookmarking this page! I love all the characters and the explanation for Zuko's scar. Pure genius, I say!! Karma Chameleon!
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Kyatto
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Post by Kyatto on Feb 22, 2007 19:59:53 GMT -5
WOW! Please, please update? This is magnificent! The idea is wonnnderful! I spotted NO GRAMMAR MISTAKES! *hyperventilating* And best of all... the Zutara is REALISTIC. He started off arrogant and snotty- his characterization is PERFECT! I shall be bookmarking this page! I love all the characters and the explanation for Zuko's scar. Pure genius, I say!! Karma Chameleon! Thank you so very much! I think my secret may be the fact I'm not a Zutara shipper. That may be why I see passed the excitement of a fluffy romance between the two and get down to the nitty-gritty with it. In the beginning of the series Zuko was a jerk. There's no way even in an AU he'd magically be all nice to Katara. I've really been enjoying writing this, so my updates may come sooner rather than later. XD (I'm at a slump with some of my other stories) This one's the first where I've had the beginning, middle, and end all planned out in my head. Glad you like!
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Kyatto
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Post by Kyatto on Feb 23, 2007 14:24:12 GMT -5
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Ilise
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Post by Ilise on Feb 23, 2007 14:57:16 GMT -5
YAY! ANOTHER CHAPTER! You'll see I reviewed. I can't WAIT for the next one, it should be interesting to see them clash and go boom. It's awesome that she'll still be able to see Aang; the people'll be like, 'you know him?!' Please please PLEASE post the next chapter? _Devoted_Fan_lol_
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Kyatto
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Post by Kyatto on Feb 23, 2007 15:04:26 GMT -5
YAY! ANOTHER CHAPTER! You'll see I reviewed. I can't WAIT for the next one, it should be interesting to see them clash and go boom. It's awesome that she'll still be able to see Aang; the people'll be like, 'you know him?!' Please please PLEASE post the next chapter? _Devoted_Fan_lol_ Oh, I've got plans for this one. XD I've got the basics up until Chapter 10 already planned out in my head. Just need to work out some of the details, but that usually comes while I'm writing. I have a feeling this fic will require a loooot of chapters. So while I'm on break now I'm trying to get as many as I can written because once I'm back at work it'll be a little harder. X3 I should have another chapter up sometime tomorrow or Sunday most likely. I'm glad you like it!
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Ilise
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Post by Ilise on Feb 23, 2007 22:16:58 GMT -5
Haha, been there. I was writing this story- put up a chapter a day, twenty pages each, for seven days- and when school started I couldn't update for four months. Lost all my reviewers. Story go kaput.
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Kyatto
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Post by Kyatto on Feb 23, 2007 23:04:37 GMT -5
Usually when I know it's going to be a while between updates I'd pput up a hiatus message explaining "Hey I got a job, etc.". That way it keeps me from getting threats and people know another update will come, just not right away. I should be able to keep updating this for another couple of weeks. (I got put on sick leave.) Not sure after that.
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Kyatto
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Post by Kyatto on Feb 25, 2007 12:56:03 GMT -5
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Post by avatrshay on Feb 25, 2007 13:20:10 GMT -5
I had gotten through the first two chapters and I had to comment on something ;D
One: No Jetko? Wow... ;D
Two: "He just supposed it was because of his sense of fashion..." I love you Kyatto ;D
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Jenny Lee
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Post by Jenny Lee on Feb 25, 2007 13:20:56 GMT -5
Wow, really good. I just read the first two chapters so far, and I'm starting chapter three. Despite it being AU, you really stuck the characters with their same personalities . Good job!
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Kyatto
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Post by Kyatto on Feb 25, 2007 13:28:33 GMT -5
I had gotten through the first two chapters and I had to comment on something ;D One: No Jetko? Wow... ;D Two: "He just supposed it was because of his sense of fashion..." I love you Kyatto ;D There's some mild Slash in it. Not too much. Just enough for plot evelopment. XD I've decided to try my hand at writing Het, because I haven't done that in months. And yes, his fashion sense will be mentioned a lot because it's true. @jenny Lee: Thank you! I do try my hardest to keep everyone as in character as possible. XD
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Ilise
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Post by Ilise on Feb 25, 2007 16:33:11 GMT -5
HA! Go KATARA! I LOOOOOOVEd this chapter- please, please update! Make her call him more nasty names! Cause then I won't get so frustrated I want to break my computer! AAAH ZUKO'S SUCH A *****!!!! Ahem. Anyway. I loved the part where she slapped him- <3<3 Katara. She's just too awesome. You stayed perfectly in character- as usual- and please, please continue!
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Kyatto
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Post by Kyatto on Feb 25, 2007 18:41:25 GMT -5
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