Hi, i'm new here, but I started this story on another site (ASN), so I wanted to try it out here, tell me your thoughts!
Name: Ryu. (Meaning - Nine)
Nation: Fire.
Bender: Fire & Air.
Eyes: Black.
Hair: Black.
Clothing: Black shorts (ripped at the knees) & a black sleveless shirt.
Height/Weigh: Average height and weight.
Age: 15
Weapon: None (Had two katans in the past)
Skill Level: High
Flaws: Suffers from a horrible memory loss, his entire past is lost. Has sudden uncontrolable bursts, in which all elements are unleashed. Was created by the Fire Nation under a secret breeding program. (Read the story)
Family: A royal Fire Nation family.
History: Lived under the Fire Nation for 12 years in a breeding plantation. The Fire Nation's plan was to make him a mimic avatar, they failed only allowing him to bend Fire. He was thrown in a jail cell at the age of 6. In there, he watched a dragonfly, and learned the dragon fly style of fighting. Doing this, he bended Air & Fire in unison. He soon fled after a prison break, him being the only succesful one to leave. He fled to the Western Air Temple. Later, he led Jet and his gang through a secret tunnel entering the Fire Nation on the Day of Black Sun. When they arrived at the city, Jet's Gang was going to kill anyone the found. Ryu went into a rage, and binded them all using earth bending. Ryu then fled back to the Western Air Temple to hide, while Jet's gans future is uncertain. He was then discoverd by Toph at the Western Air Temple. After Toph talked to him, he joined the Gaang as they fled from Azula. He quickly bonded with the Gaang, and told them his story. He soon fell in love with Toph, and she loved him back. One day, he woke and he had to leave to find an antidote. The Fire Nation wanted all the projects to die before Sozins Comet, to make sure nothing bad could happen. Only those who had the antidote would surive. After saying goodbye to the Gaang, Toph led him to the beack. He told her he loved her, and they kissed. He then left her, going into the Fire Nation.
Connections to Canon: Traveled with the Gaang for a short time, was in love with Toph.
Connections to Non-Canon: Unkown.
Name: Minsheng (Meaning - Voice of the People)
Nation: Fire.
Bender: None.
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Short & brown.
Gender: Male
Clothing: Wears only black shorts, and a black headband. Rarely wears a shirt.
Height/Weigh: A bit tall, average weight.
Age: 16
Weapon: His fists.
Skill Level: Skilled.
Flaws: Doesn't get along with the rest of the people in the jail, very bossy and nosiy, always is looking for attetion and trouble, dislikes any new outsiders. Was created by the Fire Nation under a secret breeding program. (Read the story)
Family: None
History: Leads a small gang within the jail called The Abandoned. They are known to gang up on anyone they dislike.
Connections to Canon: None.
Connections to Non-Canon: None.
Name: Ling (Meaning - Understanding, compassion.)
Nation: Fire.
Bender: Earth.
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Long and brown.
Gender: Female.
Clothing: Wears the normal Fire Nation peasent clothing. Very simple using only red and black.
Height/Weigh: Average.
Age: 14
Weapon: None.
Skill Level: High
Flaws: Sometime she bites of more than she can chew. Always is or wants to be in control. Has a bad temper. Was created by the Fire Nation under a secret breeding program. (Read the story)
Family: None
History: She was always the one to greet and help any new comers thrown into the jail cell. She hates Minsheng and his gang.
Connections to Canon: None.
Connections to Non-Canon: None.
Name: Ping (Meaning - Stable) & Peng (Meaning - Roc, Bird of the Legends)
Nation: Fire.
Bender: Water
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Short brown.
Gender: Both Male.
Clothing: Ping wears red FN cloths with a black symbol. Peng was black FN clothes with a red symbol.
Height/Weigh: Average for their age.
Age: 9
Weapon: None
Skill Level: Low
Flaws: They always make honest mistakes, and are clumsy. Their speech is sometimes slurred or slow, due to age and lack of education. They always want attetion and postive critism. Was created by the Fire Nation under a secret breeding program. (Read the story)
Family: They are twins.
History: Are known to always follow Ling around, and she acts like a older sister/mother to them, Ling also named them.
Connections to Canon: None.
Connections to Non-Canon: None.
Name: Siyu (Meaning - Thinking of the World.)
Nation: Fire.
Bender: Fie.
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Short and brown.
Gender: Male
Clothing: Wears a white sleveless cotton shirt, and red shorts.
Height/Weigh: Average, but a bit short.
Age: 17
Weapon: A long metal pole.
Skill Level: High.
Flaws: Always seems to forgive people's mistakes, never wants to hurt people in any situation. Was created by the Fire Nation under a secret breeding program. (Read the story)
Family: None
History: Minsheng and his gang constinatly pick a fight with him, he wins easily by only dodging their attacks, forcing them to give up. Has known to be a peace maker throughout the jail
Connections to Canon: None
Connections to Non-Canon: None.
Name: Jian (Meaning - Healthy.)
Nation: Fire.
Bender: Water.
Eyes: Pale.
Hair: Long white hair, normally covers one eye.
Gender: Female.
Clothing: Wears normal FN pesant clothing.
Height/Weigh: Skinny (not to an extreme), A bit short.
Age: 13
Weapon: None.
Skill Level: Low
Flaws: Very quiet. Never speaks her mind. She is a follower, not a leader, and a watcher. Lives in the shadow of her older brothers. Was created by the Fire Nation under a secret breeding program. (Read the story)
Family: Ru and Minzhe (Both older brothers)
History: Ling's best friend, they are always together. Once, when a soilder tried to take her older brother away, she shot a spear of ice at the soilder, badly wounding him.
Connections to Canon: None
Connections to Non-Canon: Two older brothers. (Ru and Minzhe.)
Name: Minzhe (Meaning - Sensitive and Wise.)
Nation: Fire.
Bender: Water.
Eyes: Pale.
Hair: Long white hair.
Gender: Male
Clothing: Wears normal FN pesant clothing.
Height/Weigh: Average.
Age: 15
Weapon: None.
Skill Level: Average.
Flaws: Very analitical about everything, always views thing from a 'science' view. Is always correcting his little sister. Was created by the Fire Nation under a secret breeding program. (Read the story)
Family: Jian and Ru.
History: He had a pet snake, that was killed by a Fire Nation soilder. Since then, he refuses to study any animal, scared of making another bond.
Connections to Canon: None
Connections to Non-Canon: Jian (Younger sister) Ru (Older brother)
Name: Ru (Meaning - Scholar.)
Nation: Fire.
Bender: Water.
Eyes: Pale.
Hair: Short white hair.
Gender: Male
Clothing: Wears a long white coat, and black pants that are mostly covered by the coat.
Height/Weigh: A bit taller, but mostly average.
Age: 25
Weapon: None.
Skill Level: High.
Flaws: Super protective over his family and girlfriend. Always making an escape plan, which is stopped by the Fire Nation guards. Was created by the Fire Nation under a secret breeding program. (Read the story)
Family: Jian and Minzhe.
History: He is a genius or medicine and healing. After finding a man who had taken the antidote, he operated on the man, and found out how to recreate the antidote. He is known as a hero to anyone in the jail, and he is also the oldest. Him and his girl friend, Xiu, have been together sometime, but can’t get officially married since they are locked up.
Connections to Canon: None
Connections to Non-Canon: Jian (Younger sister) Minzhe (Younger brother) Xiu (Girlfriend)
Name: Xiu (Meaning - Grace.)
Nation: Fire.
Bender: Water.
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Long brown hair.
Gender: Female.
Clothing: The normal FN peasant clothing.
Height/Weigh: Average.
Age: 24
Weapon: A long wooden staff.
Skill Level: Very high.
Flaws: Always worries about her boyfriend getting taken away by FN soldiers. She learned fighting from trying to keep the older men off her before she moved to the jail cell. Was created by the Fire Nation under a secret breeding program. (Read the story)
Family: None
History: Once, she fended off three FN soldiers defending her boyfriend, using only a staff. She acts as a mother towards Jian, and taught her waterbending.
Connections to Canon: None.
Connections to Non-Canon: Ru (Boyfriend)
Name: Rong (Meaning - martial.)
Nation: Fire.
Bender: Fire & Air.
Eyes: Black
Hair: Long black hair.
Gender: Male
Clothing: Black short and a black t-shirt.
Height/Weigh: Average.
Age: 15
Weapon: None.
Skill Level: Very high.
Flaws: His twin brother was taken from him, and he was looking for him. He has a bad anger. Was created by the Fire Nation under a secret breeding program. (Read the story)
Family: Twin brother.
History: Very loud and outgoing, is always getting in a fight with Minsheng and his gang.
Connections to Canon: None.
Connections to Non-Canon: Ryu (Twin Brother)
Name: Yunxu (Meaning - charming.)
Nation: Fire.
Bender: Air.
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Long blonde.
Gender: Male
Clothing: Black pants, along with a red shirt. The shirt has a crossed out fire nation symbol sewn onto it. Always wears a black bandana around his head.
Height/Weigh: A bit taller, and a bit skinny.
Age: 20
Weapon: None.
Skill Level: High.
Flaws: Very cocky. Always think of himself as the best. Was created by the Fire Nation under a secret breeding program. (Read the story)
Family: None.
History: Has be known to be ‘badass’. He constantly annoys FN guards. On the day of the prison break (the one Ryu used to escape) he planned to lead a group to the FN palace, they were eventually stopped. Known as the biggest rebel. Close friend to Ru. His girlfriend, Nia, is the thinker and planner to all of his plots.
Connections to Canon: None.
Connections to Non-Canon: Nia (Girlfriend)
Name: Nia (Meaning - thinking.)
Nation: Fire.
Bender: Earth
Eyes: black
Hair: Long black hair.
Gender: Female
Clothing: Wears the same clothing as Yunxu, along with the same matching bandana.
Height/Weigh: Shorter for her age, a bit skinny.
Age: 19
Weapon: None.
Skill Level: High.
Flaws: Never wants to be in the spotlight, always hides behind her boyfriend. Was created by the Fire Nation under a secret breeding program. (Read the story)
Family: None.
History: Is the ‘brains’ behind Yunxu’s ‘bronze’. She created every plan, and he puts it into play. She had been working on an escape plan for two years.
Connections to Canon: None.
Connections to Non-Canon: Yunxu (Boyfriend)
Name: Tao (Meaning – great waves.)
Nation: Fire.
Bender: Water.
Eyes: Blue.
Hair: Short brown hair.
Gender: Male
Clothing: Wears black shorts, and a plain blue t-shirt.
Height/Weigh: Tall for his age, a bit heavy (due to muscle)
Age: 16
Weapon: None.
Skill Level: Extremely high.
Flaws: Anger sometimes gets the best of him, and in his eyes, you can never make a mistake. Was created by the Fire Nation under a secret breeding program. (Read the story)
Family: None.
History: Due to his skill, he teaches water bending to younger children. He is always with his best bro, Siyu.
Connections to Canon: None.
Connections to Non-Canon: None.
Name: Meili (Meaning – beautiful.)
Nation: Fire.
Bender: Air.
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Long, wavy, and red.
Gender: Female.
Clothing: Red pants (rolled up) and a red shirt.
Height/Weigh: Average.
Age: 15
Weapon: None.
Skill Level: High.
Flaws: Sometimes, she lets her beauty get the best of her. Was created by the Fire Nation under a secret breeding program. (Read the story)
Family: None.
History: She is a great air bender, and loves to have fun. She hangs out with Ling and Jian, and loves hanging out with Siyu.
Connections to Canon: None.
Connections to Non-Canon: None.
Wow... Thats one long first post
Here are some links to the older story, read them if you don't understand some of the things, read these:
forums.avatarspirit.net/index.php?topic=14869.0forums.avatarspirit.net/index.php?topic=13987.0I'll have the story up here in a few!
Help me out!
~Firefight