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Post by avatariaxxxmari on Jan 28, 2007 19:29:24 GMT -5
This is a poem I wrote one night. It's suppose to be the thoughts of Katara and her two romances IMO romances ((Aang and Jet)) I know I really don't know how Katara felt about these too, but hey it's pretty neat. I posted it on fanfiction, but poems don't get noticed much I guess lol! Well tell me what you think! Oh and I'm sure you can tell the parts from each other ---
You were distant, you were silent, you were cold,
A disaster for a purpose, but I was the one you fooled.
I understand that we all make our mistakes,
Shattering one’s heart, but gluing it back together when it breaks.
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You were there, you were warm, you were true,
I should have followed the destiny, which I already knew.
You never gave up; I was the love you wanted to achieve,
As you’re always there for me, and I hope you never leave.
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You said you cared; you were so warm to the touch,
But I realized the lie, and expected too much.
It was all from your past; you’re painful past,
But before I could vision it, you were gone too fast.
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You were so young, you could never understand,
But, I knew I was mistaken once I reached for your hand.
You were so shadowed, and seemed so locked away,
Until trust was defined, and you told me it all that day.
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It’s my destiny to decide, my destiny to choose,
I’ll have one, but the other I’ll surly lose.
I’m confused, I care for both, both I want to be apart,
But who it be, who will forever lavish in my heart?
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Jenny Lee
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Post by Jenny Lee on Jan 29, 2007 6:20:42 GMT -5
That's really good. I'm not Jetara or Kataang, but it was still beautiful. Great job!
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Post by avatariaxxxmari on Jan 29, 2007 14:06:39 GMT -5
^^ Thanks! You always read my work! I appreciate it
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Jenny Lee
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Post by Jenny Lee on Jan 29, 2007 15:03:41 GMT -5
You're welcome. I love reading fanfiction. Yours is great! XD
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Post by Sokkaroksya on Jan 29, 2007 18:54:53 GMT -5
Yeah, this was really good...I like how Katara seems torn between the two, it's an angle I haven't seen before. I ship both Kataang and Jetara, so I really liked this.
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Post by avatariaxxxmari on Jan 29, 2007 19:18:41 GMT -5
^ Thanks so much you guys ^^
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