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Post by gigirl942 on Jun 8, 2006 21:09:22 GMT -5
Okay. I have a request. Mai and Zuko (you knew it was coming). What I'm going I'm going to different authors with the same requests and see what I get. I'm not comparing. I just can't get enough. Okay, after the final battle with Daddy Dearest, Zuko is dying. Mai is with him, and it's time for secrets from both sides. Can it possibly be a first kiss oneshot? Or it can be funny. I like funny fluff.
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Post by storybookgirl on Jun 9, 2006 2:42:26 GMT -5
Oh yay! More requests!
However, just so everyone knows, I've been working on several writing projects at once (including all my requests from here), so no garauntees that I'll finish your guys' requests very soon.
It's nice to have time to write, though. There are stories I feel I haven't added to for years, haha. I just added more to Goter's and my fic, wrote a song for an original story of mine, and have been planning scenes for ...well, everything. And I finally figured out how I'm going to write this scene for this other other original story I've been working on. It's crazy. But oh so fun.
In English, we had a Pride and Prejudice Unit. In it I wrote a poem that told the whole plot and another poem that described the character of Mr. Darcy. I got a B on both poems. Evidently they didn't "flow enough" and didn't have enough "pretty words". I love my English teacher, though, and I think she's just really funny. It didn't really affect my grade, though. I got an A on the whole project. I'm actually okay with the fact she didn't like my poems because it helps me get used to being able to fit other people's styles of writing.
Anyway. Yeah, sorry I went off on a tanget there, haha. I'll try to get you guys your requests soon!
Oh, and Alleluia, I'm thinking I'll continue the necklace fic throughout this thread. So the little continuations of it will be popping up every so often. Haha, it's going to be a longer story than I had originally thought...
Btw, Goten, have you figured out how she gets her outfit yet? Just wondering.
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Post by storybookgirl on Jun 16, 2006 4:28:03 GMT -5
For gigirl: ------------------------------- The Final Battle was over. Mai was one of the few left wandering the field. The Fire Nation's army, led by Princess Azula, had won. However, her army was not completely victorious. The Avatar and his comrades had snuck into the palace and taken it. Fire Lord Ozai was now dead. The rest, well, Mai didn't know. But she wasn't really thinking about it. She had found him. There he was, there lay Zuko, bleeding onto the pale, dry grass. She kneeled at his side slowly, watching him take in every shaking breath. Their eyes met. The two didn't say anything for a few moments, communicating only through their gold and grey eyes. She stroked his head. "This wasn't how it was supposed to be," Mai murmured. "We were supposed to be fighting on the same side." Zuko didn't say anything. "You couldn't make it, could you. You couldn't get through the battle unscathed. ...Azula said you would die. She said so before the fighting even began. I ignored her then and told myself it wouldn't happen." "Maybe Azula doesn't always lie," muttered Zuko. Mai's bottom lip trembled and she blinked away tears as she tried to contain the fluttery feeling her heart was making at the sound of his voice. "Don't cry, Mai," he rasped. "Crying is boring. Talking is more entertaining. ...can you talk to me?" Mai straitened slightly in surprise. "Just talk to me." Mai obeyed, nodded her head and taking in a deep breath before beginning. "It looks like your side might win. It probably will. I never thought Azula would make a very good Fire Lady anyway. The Avatar successfully snuck into the palace and overthrew the Fire Lord. ...are you cold?" Zuko shook his head no. The light in his eyes was starting to fade. "The stars will be coming out soon," whispered Mai. "You know how I always said it was boring looking up at the stars? ...I lied. I love looking up at them. I think they’re beautiful. Stupid, isn't it?" Mai stroked his head again as her forbidden tears threatened to leak from her downcast eyes. "The battlefield is all quiet now. It's full of death and destruction, but it's so peaceful. Much more peaceful this way. I don't think quiet's boring anymore, the sound of the battle scared me. It scared me! You were fighting on the opposite side and I knew you might get hurt! What if I had to fight you?! It's all peaceful now. So quiet. ...say something, Zuko!! Say something!!!" Mai leaned in, her face close to Zuko's, her arms around him. Zuko grasped her hand tightly in his, sweat and blood leaking out from in between the chapped skin of their hands. "I love you," she whispered to him. A lonely tear trickled down to her chin. "I love you, Mai," he muttered. Suddenly, all light and life was gone from Zuko's golden eyes. Mai took in a shuddering breath. She didn't know whether she should let her tears fall freely, or to forbid herself to shed any. She wasn't sure which Zuko would have wanted from her. Mai leaned into Zuko's still warm body, her cheek rubbing affectionately against the rough fabric of his Earth Kingdom shirt. "I knew he would die," said a cold voice from behind Mai. Mai didn't move. She barely dared to breath. Azula took a step closer to her... to her "friend." "It's a good thing, really. You weren't pretty enough for him. He wasn't strong enough for you. It's better this way, really. It's a shame I didn't get to kill him, though. Real shame. I guess it just proves how worthless and weak he really was. Not that it matters now, anyway. ...come on, Mai. We have business to attend to at the palace." Mai rose to her feet very slowly, her head downcast to the course grass at her feet. "He's dead, Mai. You should get over it. Come and join me, Mai. We have no further business here, my friend." Mai turned around sharply, it all happening in one fluid movement. Azula barely had time to gasp as two knives were plunged straight into her stomach. "I'm not your friend," stated Mai, "not anymore." Azula looked up into Mai's face, eyes wide and blood trickling from her mouth and onto her full, red lips. "...but of course, Azula. You always lie." Azula fell to her knees, clutching her stomach, face screwed up against the pain. "You traitor," the princess accused through clenched teeth. "I'm not your friend," stated Mai, "and you were never mine." Azula fell onto her side, curled up a little, then was motionless. "Who betrayed whom, Azula?" Mai then turned on her heel and started striding toward the palace, after giving her prince a last farewell kiss on his forehead. The stars, Mai found, were particularly beautiful that night. And the Avatar would surely be glad to have her help. --------------------------------- EDIT: I'm terribly sorry, I know you wanted comedy, but this popped into my head and I couldn't figure out a way to possibly make it funny. I hope you enjoy it anyway! EDIT EDIT: Happy Birthday, gigirl!!! Haha, I'm glad I got this to you on your birthday! Cool... HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
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Post by gigirl942 on Jun 16, 2006 9:32:46 GMT -5
Thanks so much! I'm very happy! It's beautiful. Exactly what I wanted!
What a wonderful present!
EDIT: w00t! We've got karma back! So I raised yours as a reward for such a beautiful drabble/oneshot!
Thanks again!
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Post by storybookgirl on Jun 23, 2006 23:30:15 GMT -5
I posted this for the Sokoites in the Soko War Room. I figured I might as well post it here, too. I haven't really had much time to go on the comp recently, so most of my fan fic writing has been going on in my head. So until I post all that stuff, hope you guys like this. ---------------------------- The pleasantly pretty brown eyed youth stared at her raw, red hands. She had been hard at work for a long, long time now. This so called "Final Battle" seemed as if it would never end. Song knew she had to be strong, knew she had to keep smiling, hurrying, and working. But she found it so very hard. So hard. Everything seemed better, though, when He sneaked his arms around her from behind. She would melt into his his warm embrace and burry herself into his chest, whether it was sweaty or not. They would stand in silence for a long time, the banished Fire Prince and she. Yes. Everything seemed less hopeless and scary when He was there.
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Post by tiaramaki on Jun 27, 2006 16:17:49 GMT -5
I would like a request: TOD: Tsuna Pairing (TsenxLimuna) Tsen Age 20 Fire Nation Bends Fire Has shoulder-length black hair tied up in a ponytail (Much lower than Zuko's; it touches his neck) and it's tied by fur from a hamsterkitty. he has golden eyes, and wears a bethored necklace (in drabble). He currently wears Water Tribe clothes. Misc: He's nervous around Limuna, who saved him when he was wounded at the battle of the North Pole. He joined the army to see the world, not because it would be better for his family. He rarely Firebends, but only in battle, and protects Limuna all he can. He's sometimes shy around the people in the North Pole, but Limuna always assures him it's OK to be himself and open up his feelings. A few times when he wanted to tell Limuna something, however, he cancels the conversation and leaves. History, Family: Tsen's father and mother are resided in the Fire Nation. He has a little sister, named Hei Long*. Hei Long and Tsen always played games a few years ago (Hei Long is 15 years old). Tsen's father told him to join the army for the future of his family, but he told his father what his true dream was: to see the other three Nations, even though many of the Air Nomads perished 100 years ago. His father thought the idea ridiculous, however, although Tsen went for that purpose anyway. Tsen knows little about Hydao, except the fact that Limuna loathes him and has many nightmares about him. Sometimes Tsen visits her house to keep company whenever she has the nightmare again. Limuna Age 17 Water Tribe- North Pole Bends Water She has brown hair tied up the way the Waterbenders always do, and has blue eyes. She has cocoa skin, and also wears a bethored necklace (again, in drabble). Also wears Water Tribe clothes. Misc: She accidentaly discovered she was a Waterbender when she healed Tsen at the outside of her home at the NP battle. She's not very good at it, however, and it takes a few days to two weeks to get a move right. She's not strong, either, and sometimes needs Tsen to help her whenever they encounter a battle. Since she's not strong, she uses Waterbending to form an icy shield around her. She is a kind-hearted young woman and, at times, encounters things that remind her about her past. History, Family: Her father went off to fight the war, so, fortunately, he wasn't at the battle in the NP. Her mother lives somewhere else in the North Pole. Limuna has a big brother, named Baiji**. He always looked after her when she was a little girl, and he is a skilled fighter. Limuna was kidnapped by Hydao, which is still unknown why, whom Limuna's mother arranged her to marry to. When Hydao went somewhere, however, she escaped and immediately went to tell Cheif Arnook about it. Hydao was then exiled from the North Pole, not before saying something that has haunted her for two years since. Limuna had Tsen live in another home somewhere, although it's not that far from her home. They sometimes meet each other outside of her home to have a short converstion (thus, where the drabble takes place). In the drabble: When Tsen asks her to marry him. It's nighttime, in the full moon. Tsen is nervous, and he tried to tell her his feelings a few times, but he was frightened that she wouldn't feel the same for him. Anything else that happens can be your choice. Take your time, and good luck; your drabbles are awesome! *Hei Long- Chinese for Black Dragon **Baiji- Chinese for White Dolphin
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Post by storybookgirl on Jul 4, 2006 3:43:12 GMT -5
Oh, thanks so much! I'm looking forward to actually writing a proposal scene, haha! Just one quick thing, could you please either post or PM me more about the personalities and histories of your OCs, please? Because that would be great!
Also, no garantees(sp) (I can't spell today...) on how soon I'll be able to post anything. I'm working on Goter and my story as well as dealing with life, which takes up oh-so-much time. I'll try, though.
Oh, and for those who don't know, my grandpa's in the hospital. So please keep him in your thoughts and/or prayers! Thanks...
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Post by writer on Jul 4, 2006 12:35:36 GMT -5
Hey! can you do a Drabble on my Trio, just ask for the profiles and I will give them to you..
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Post by tiaramaki on Jul 7, 2006 11:36:01 GMT -5
*Whew* Done with the info adding! Take your time on the requests!
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Post by RadiantBeam on Jul 7, 2006 19:53:26 GMT -5
May I make a request? Unless you're busy...
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Post by tiaramaki on Jul 19, 2006 16:48:22 GMT -5
*Revives thread*
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Post by storybookgirl on Jul 26, 2006 21:39:38 GMT -5
Of course, I'll take more requests! I'll try to get them done as soon as I can, but it might take a while.... And I'll try to post that last one soon, Hok! Much love to everyone!
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Post by tiaramaki on Jul 27, 2006 13:52:29 GMT -5
Thank you!!! ^.^
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Post by storybookgirl on Aug 5, 2006 22:38:31 GMT -5
Okay, Hok! Here ya go! Oh, and please tell me if I did anything about your characters or the story wrong! Hope you enjoy.
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"Tsen, what is it you have to tell me?"
Tsen's hand shook. She had taken it in both of her hands. Oh, how it made him nervous! Was she making him that way on purpose?
"Limuna," -he cleared his throat- "we have known each other and been friends for some time now. It has been one month, three weeks, and a day-and-a-half since that memorable battle and-"
"Tsen, your talking like a soldier again," Limuna laughed. "Come now, talk like the person I know you are and tell me what it is you have to say!"
Tsen roughly freed his hand from Limuna's two solft ones. Both hands now on the ice-statue garden wall, he leaned and looked out into the beautiful blue silver view.
"You always told me to stop ignoring my feelings ang let them out. I think it might be time to really let them out. I just... don't know if you feel the same way I feel and... and now I'm just acting stupid."
She watched him silently as Tsen turned his golden gaze to the full moon, its silvery rays kissing all that lay beneath it. Tsen heaved a great sigh, looked down to compose himself, and finally looked back unto Limuna's soft face.
"I love you Limuna. I know we're both betrothed to different people, but I can't ignore the feeling that we should be together. That we should be the ones our necklaces are for. I love you. I love you and... and I want you so much to feel the same way."
Limuna stared into his hopeful eyes and smiled. She took his face in both her hands and said "How I wanted you so much to say that to me."
Tsens golden eyes widened and his mouth curved into a smile even wider. He took both her hands in his and kissed them.
"Limuna, we can get away from this place. We can see the world and live happily together forever. ...if you want to."
Limuna slowly withdrew her hands and looked out over the wall.
"...I want to. Tsen, I truly want to but... I can't. Or maybe I just shouldn't. I don't know. What would Baiji say and... Tsen" -she looked back to him- "I love you. I want to marry you, I want to be with you always, I want us to be happy toghether, but there are so many things I want! And you know that we can't always have what we want."
"Limuna...p-please. I know it will be h-hard. It's hard for me even to say, but..." -he smiled- "we can make it work. I know we can!"
Limuna suddenly threw her arms about her loves neck, making him start. Shyly, he slipped his arms about her waist.
"All we can do is pledge our love. ...for now. But Tsen, please, know I love you! I love you! More than anything and I would marry you in a heart beat if I could! But Tsen, please, let's make a vow!"
Tsen hesitated only for a moment. "I, Tsen, vow to always love and protect you to the greatest of my ability, Limuna."
"I, Limuna, vow to always love and be there for you to the greatest of my ability, Tsen."
The two seperated, paused, then slowly came together to make their lips finally meet. The kiss was sweet, pure, and powerful. As they broke apart, eyes still closed, savoring the kiss, they heard Baiji's strong voice echo out over the garden: "Limuna! Limuna!"
Limuna turned in Baiji's direction, turned back to Tsen, gave one last kiss, and fled, not wanting to get caught by her brother in a romantic scene with her fire soldier protector. Tsen watched her run in and out between ice statues, up stairs, and finally turn around a corner when she was out of sight. He had wanted to stop her, to whisk her away that very moment when they kissed, to leave the North Pole forever and find a life of their own. ...but he had been too hesitant, too understanding, too concerned... and too shy.
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Post by tiaramaki on Aug 7, 2006 15:46:19 GMT -5
You get a huuuuuuuuuug....because I love iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit!!!!!! You are the best!!!!!!!!! *Gives teh Kar-ma and hug*
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