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Post by cara24 on Apr 5, 2008 17:21:43 GMT -5
Just thought I would post some of my poems! ^^ Constructive critisism is appreciated! So if you have ANY advice please don't hesitate to voice it! Tell Me You Hate Me Tell me you hate me. Why can’t you tell me that? You’ll beat me till I bleed Inside and out But you won’t say that
Before you kill me. My friend Tell me you hate me. You need my life. I need your hate.
My blood spills at your feet. You still don’t say the words. I need to hear. Before I cross over. Tell me you hate me.
My life is slinking away. You watch. Just tell me you hate me. The words that leave your mouth shock me. Goodbye, my friend.
Tears Tears I cried them for you Looking back on that night I ask myself the same question Did you ever love me
Tears I still cry them for you Hoping someday You’ll be back for me To tell me you always loved me.
Gone From My Heart Are you going to turn your back on me Like you did so long ago Hate flows through your veins Love is not there at all
I probably would’ve cared Back then Now I’m turning my back on you My love turned to dust in my heart
I wasted so many, many tears Those nights are gone So are you, my dear Gone, gone from my heart
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kiffer
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Post by kiffer on Apr 16, 2008 17:50:51 GMT -5
That was good... Karma
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Post by cara24 on Apr 17, 2008 19:49:49 GMT -5
Thanks ^^
I have one that I really want to put up, I wrote it awhile ago, I'll have to find it.
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