Post by truwaterbender on Mar 27, 2008 19:41:40 GMT -5
Well here's the original one I promised, this one is very long also, you may notice several similarites between this one and V.2
Well let's get to it!
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Katy, Jade, and Anna were the nerds of the school. They hung out together and got called the nerd group.
Katy wore coke bottle glasses in front of her brown eyes and blonde hair that was in a bun all the time.
Jade perhaps the best looking in the grade she had long black hair sparkling blue eyes and had a healthy complexion. The only thing that held her back was the plaid skirt and white polo that was the schools uniform, and her giant brain.
Anna was the computer nerd of the group she even programmed her own game designed by her onto her computer. Her head was small with a brown ponytail and her hazel eyes hiding behind round flashy glasses.
They may be the low social class but they kept a secret. They were their own rock band. They called themselves, The Unknown, when they played it was a whole different side of them. Katy and Anna didn’t need their glasses to play the guitar and the drums and Jade had the most harmonic voice in the world but she hid it because she was afraid that the preps would make fun of her for showing off. They changed their clothes and you would never hear anything so amazing.
Amanda and Molly were the most popular girls they rubbed in everyone’s face they were a rock duet, called Sparkle and Shine.
Amanda stood on a table and said “OKAY, me and Molly are hosting a battle of the bands.” Stand up if you wish to join. Everyone looked around. “Okay-“Amanda started but got interrupted.
By Jade, who stood up on the table and yelled “ Hey! We want to join!”
Katy and Anna whispered in her ear “Jade what the world are you doing, we can’t perform!”
Jade said in a normal voice “Yes, yes we can!”
Amanda interrupted “What? You think you can challenge us?”
Jade whispered to them, “Come on, back me up here. We can do it!”
The three stood up on the table, and said, “We challenge you, the students as the judges, TO A BATTLE OF THE BANDS!!!”
Amanda was cocky, too cocky. “Yeah, I think we all know who is going to win.” She mumbled below her breath.
Later the three were in Anna’s garage, about to practice, and at the same time Amanda and Molly were getting started.
The battle was going to take place on Saturday, tomorrow. Both bands were practicing all their songs, so they would be ready.
The next day the whole town was abuzz, somehow, or as we know them as Amanda and Molly, the news had spread to all corners of the town. The battle was going to be held at school, at the break of noon. It seemed as it the entire town was there.
Molly and Amanda were going first, they were dressed in sparkly embellished jeans, and tank tops that had to have a million rhinestones on the shirts. But in the whole mess of the glitz of their shirts, there were purple ones that had M for Molly and an A for Amanda. The background of the shirts were pink, if you could see past all the rhinestones and the hand sprinkled glitter on top of that. They wore pink flip, flops of course embellished with MORE rhinestones. They both had makeup that was pinked than a pig and had loads of glitter on it, and if you can't top that bad job, it looked like it was done in the dark!
Jade, Anna, and Katy showed up at eleven fifty-nine, but before they got there, guess who was starting rumors that the wiped out and forfeited, of course it was courtesy of Amanda and Molly. they showed up wearing skater shoes, and almost black jeans. They also wore black flip flops. Their shirts were professionally done, not hand done with mom's old bedazzler. It said The Unknown, in white on the black base of the shirt. They had guitars and drums and a microphone on the shirts on the back too.
Jade was wearing the shirt but her hair was let out and had put on makeup that looked decent. Her hair was curled and had a slick smirk on her face, ready to beat the living daylights out of Amanda and Molly in the battle.
Anna showed up wearing the same outfit as her band mates, but she had her hair down and her big, huge glasses were off. Her hair was straightened, and she had a hair highlighter kit that she used to make blonde streaks in her hair. She also wore the same smile as Jade, for the same reason.
Katy was smiling like the others, her blonde hair finally let down. She had her hair straight like Anna and the same little smile too. Her glasses were at home, and she had her electric guitar strapped to her back.
Amanda caught sight of them and snobbily said "Well it's about time you got here!"
Jade got really annoyed, "Well at least we showed up," She smirked even more then shouted "TO KICK YOU BUTTS!"
Anna and Katy smirked even more too, and shouted after Jade "OH YEAH, YOU KNOW IT!"
Amanda was just about to blow her top but she hastily said "Come on Molly and get this over with." As she stomped off onto the stage.
Their act was, well, not the greatest thing you've ever heard. The crowd was booing, and half had left, the only one's cheering were their and their parents.
Molly and Amanda stepped off the stage in shame, proceeded by Anna, Jade, and Katy. They quickly set up their equipment and Jade took the microphone.
The crowd mumbled and talked, some said things like, "If Sparkle and Shine was so bad I can't wait to see what these losers come up with." or, "Let's leave they can't be much better than the last group."
But the feedback from the microphone quieted everyone. then Jade yelled "ARE......YOU.....READY.....TO ROCK!!!!"
The crowd went into an uproar. Jade smiled at the effect and she looked back to see her friends smiling just as big.
She whispered to the two "On three, ready, one" Katy strummed her guitar. "..two..." Anna started her drum part, then finally in, in a normal voice Jade said "Three!" Katy started a guitar part as Jade started to sing softly, "Well sometimes you feel like your not the one, you feel as it the whole world is gone, but follow though and you see," Then she nearly yelled, "WHAT'S INSIDE OF ME!"
Then about three minutes later they finished with a final strum on Katy's guitar
The crowd went wild. All the voices of the crowd morphed together and said "ENCORE!" In a crazy volume!
Jade took the microphone again, "Before we do, WHO DO YOU ALL THINK WON?"
Once again the all of the different voices from the crowd morphed into one in a cheer, "The Unknown!"
Jade yelled again "ARE YOU READY TO ROCK!" She started to count again. "One," the guitar strum got the crowd cheering, "Two," The drums started, as the crowd fell almost silent, "Three!" Then Jade started to sing again.
Awhile later after they played nearly every song they had it was almost one. The crowd had got their fill and was bustling back to the nearly deserted town.
Their mom's and dad's met up with them as they were packing up. Their parents gave then huge hugs of congratulations.
Naturally Anna's dad always had something funny to say and with a smirk he said "Well you showed those valley girls who's boss!" Then some sympathy, "You did a fantastic job honey cakes," As he gave her a hug.
"Honey cakes? Jade and Katy said mockingly.
Anna sighed and said "Yes honey cakes, well at least her has his own special name for me." She said with embarrassment, then pride as she gave him a hug in return for his.
"Hey!" he said, "Who wants to go out for ice cream!"
Anna, Jade, and Katy all nodded to each other and said, "We'd love to!"
Suddenly Amanda and Molly showed up behind then with a solemn look on their faces. They each said without a hint of feeling in her voice, "Nice job," and said under a fake cough, "You guys are pretty cool."
The three smiled, "Hey, you want to go out for ice cream with us?"
Amanda started "Bu-"
But Molly interrupted, "But what about all the things we said, and done to you guys?"
Katy quickly replied to her comment "I think I speak for all of us to say, forgive and forget, and what you said is really nice. If you can admit that we can forgive you." The two nodded.
Amanda and Molly smiled. Amanda happily said "Thanks, we promise to be nicer to you, we just had no idea, and nicer to everyone else."
Jade spoke up, "Now that this is over, I have a feeling we are going to be the most popular kids in school, but we don't want to be, we like being left alone." Anna and Katy both nodded again.
Molly chuckled "Yeah, I thought of that too, we'll try our hardest to keep your ranks."
Anna turned around to her dad "So can we go out for ice cream now?"
Well let's get to it!
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Battle of the Bands
Katy, Jade, and Anna were the nerds of the school. They hung out together and got called the nerd group.
Katy wore coke bottle glasses in front of her brown eyes and blonde hair that was in a bun all the time.
Jade perhaps the best looking in the grade she had long black hair sparkling blue eyes and had a healthy complexion. The only thing that held her back was the plaid skirt and white polo that was the schools uniform, and her giant brain.
Anna was the computer nerd of the group she even programmed her own game designed by her onto her computer. Her head was small with a brown ponytail and her hazel eyes hiding behind round flashy glasses.
They may be the low social class but they kept a secret. They were their own rock band. They called themselves, The Unknown, when they played it was a whole different side of them. Katy and Anna didn’t need their glasses to play the guitar and the drums and Jade had the most harmonic voice in the world but she hid it because she was afraid that the preps would make fun of her for showing off. They changed their clothes and you would never hear anything so amazing.
Amanda and Molly were the most popular girls they rubbed in everyone’s face they were a rock duet, called Sparkle and Shine.
Amanda stood on a table and said “OKAY, me and Molly are hosting a battle of the bands.” Stand up if you wish to join. Everyone looked around. “Okay-“Amanda started but got interrupted.
By Jade, who stood up on the table and yelled “ Hey! We want to join!”
Katy and Anna whispered in her ear “Jade what the world are you doing, we can’t perform!”
Jade said in a normal voice “Yes, yes we can!”
Amanda interrupted “What? You think you can challenge us?”
Jade whispered to them, “Come on, back me up here. We can do it!”
The three stood up on the table, and said, “We challenge you, the students as the judges, TO A BATTLE OF THE BANDS!!!”
Amanda was cocky, too cocky. “Yeah, I think we all know who is going to win.” She mumbled below her breath.
Later the three were in Anna’s garage, about to practice, and at the same time Amanda and Molly were getting started.
The battle was going to take place on Saturday, tomorrow. Both bands were practicing all their songs, so they would be ready.
The next day the whole town was abuzz, somehow, or as we know them as Amanda and Molly, the news had spread to all corners of the town. The battle was going to be held at school, at the break of noon. It seemed as it the entire town was there.
Molly and Amanda were going first, they were dressed in sparkly embellished jeans, and tank tops that had to have a million rhinestones on the shirts. But in the whole mess of the glitz of their shirts, there were purple ones that had M for Molly and an A for Amanda. The background of the shirts were pink, if you could see past all the rhinestones and the hand sprinkled glitter on top of that. They wore pink flip, flops of course embellished with MORE rhinestones. They both had makeup that was pinked than a pig and had loads of glitter on it, and if you can't top that bad job, it looked like it was done in the dark!
Jade, Anna, and Katy showed up at eleven fifty-nine, but before they got there, guess who was starting rumors that the wiped out and forfeited, of course it was courtesy of Amanda and Molly. they showed up wearing skater shoes, and almost black jeans. They also wore black flip flops. Their shirts were professionally done, not hand done with mom's old bedazzler. It said The Unknown, in white on the black base of the shirt. They had guitars and drums and a microphone on the shirts on the back too.
Jade was wearing the shirt but her hair was let out and had put on makeup that looked decent. Her hair was curled and had a slick smirk on her face, ready to beat the living daylights out of Amanda and Molly in the battle.
Anna showed up wearing the same outfit as her band mates, but she had her hair down and her big, huge glasses were off. Her hair was straightened, and she had a hair highlighter kit that she used to make blonde streaks in her hair. She also wore the same smile as Jade, for the same reason.
Katy was smiling like the others, her blonde hair finally let down. She had her hair straight like Anna and the same little smile too. Her glasses were at home, and she had her electric guitar strapped to her back.
Amanda caught sight of them and snobbily said "Well it's about time you got here!"
Jade got really annoyed, "Well at least we showed up," She smirked even more then shouted "TO KICK YOU BUTTS!"
Anna and Katy smirked even more too, and shouted after Jade "OH YEAH, YOU KNOW IT!"
Amanda was just about to blow her top but she hastily said "Come on Molly and get this over with." As she stomped off onto the stage.
Their act was, well, not the greatest thing you've ever heard. The crowd was booing, and half had left, the only one's cheering were their and their parents.
Molly and Amanda stepped off the stage in shame, proceeded by Anna, Jade, and Katy. They quickly set up their equipment and Jade took the microphone.
The crowd mumbled and talked, some said things like, "If Sparkle and Shine was so bad I can't wait to see what these losers come up with." or, "Let's leave they can't be much better than the last group."
But the feedback from the microphone quieted everyone. then Jade yelled "ARE......YOU.....READY.....TO ROCK!!!!"
The crowd went into an uproar. Jade smiled at the effect and she looked back to see her friends smiling just as big.
She whispered to the two "On three, ready, one" Katy strummed her guitar. "..two..." Anna started her drum part, then finally in, in a normal voice Jade said "Three!" Katy started a guitar part as Jade started to sing softly, "Well sometimes you feel like your not the one, you feel as it the whole world is gone, but follow though and you see," Then she nearly yelled, "WHAT'S INSIDE OF ME!"
Then about three minutes later they finished with a final strum on Katy's guitar
The crowd went wild. All the voices of the crowd morphed together and said "ENCORE!" In a crazy volume!
Jade took the microphone again, "Before we do, WHO DO YOU ALL THINK WON?"
Once again the all of the different voices from the crowd morphed into one in a cheer, "The Unknown!"
Jade yelled again "ARE YOU READY TO ROCK!" She started to count again. "One," the guitar strum got the crowd cheering, "Two," The drums started, as the crowd fell almost silent, "Three!" Then Jade started to sing again.
Awhile later after they played nearly every song they had it was almost one. The crowd had got their fill and was bustling back to the nearly deserted town.
Their mom's and dad's met up with them as they were packing up. Their parents gave then huge hugs of congratulations.
Naturally Anna's dad always had something funny to say and with a smirk he said "Well you showed those valley girls who's boss!" Then some sympathy, "You did a fantastic job honey cakes," As he gave her a hug.
"Honey cakes? Jade and Katy said mockingly.
Anna sighed and said "Yes honey cakes, well at least her has his own special name for me." She said with embarrassment, then pride as she gave him a hug in return for his.
"Hey!" he said, "Who wants to go out for ice cream!"
Anna, Jade, and Katy all nodded to each other and said, "We'd love to!"
Suddenly Amanda and Molly showed up behind then with a solemn look on their faces. They each said without a hint of feeling in her voice, "Nice job," and said under a fake cough, "You guys are pretty cool."
The three smiled, "Hey, you want to go out for ice cream with us?"
Amanda started "Bu-"
But Molly interrupted, "But what about all the things we said, and done to you guys?"
Katy quickly replied to her comment "I think I speak for all of us to say, forgive and forget, and what you said is really nice. If you can admit that we can forgive you." The two nodded.
Amanda and Molly smiled. Amanda happily said "Thanks, we promise to be nicer to you, we just had no idea, and nicer to everyone else."
Jade spoke up, "Now that this is over, I have a feeling we are going to be the most popular kids in school, but we don't want to be, we like being left alone." Anna and Katy both nodded again.
Molly chuckled "Yeah, I thought of that too, we'll try our hardest to keep your ranks."
Anna turned around to her dad "So can we go out for ice cream now?"
The End
