Post by ilovetaang03 on Feb 28, 2008 21:21:37 GMT -5
since it is my poetry unit in english class i thought i would post a few of my poems here.
Walking down a path,
hand in hand,
the world around us is beautiful.
The birds are singing their songs but all
i hear is you whispering something in my ear.
you say it so softly as if you had it bottled up inside you
for so long.
"i love you"
my heart skips a beat. i admit my feelings, glad to finally say.
we lean in, our faces almost touching, gazing into each others eyes
we lean in closer.
right when we are about to share a soft kiss the world starts to fade around me.
your face fading to along with your wonderful voice.
then.... darkness.
i open my eyes. i am in my bed. it was just a dream. a sweet, sweet dream
The dream...
Walking down a path,
hand in hand,
the world around us is beautiful.
The birds are singing their songs but all
i hear is you whispering something in my ear.
you say it so softly as if you had it bottled up inside you
for so long.
"i love you"
my heart skips a beat. i admit my feelings, glad to finally say.
we lean in, our faces almost touching, gazing into each others eyes
we lean in closer.
right when we are about to share a soft kiss the world starts to fade around me.
your face fading to along with your wonderful voice.
then.... darkness.
i open my eyes. i am in my bed. it was just a dream. a sweet, sweet dream
Calm
Dark, cold water pulls me
under with great force.
My senses seem to close up.
I don't know which way is up
or down.
I'm at will of the current that is contently
dragging me forward.
I attempt to stand up only
to fall down again.
With another try I successfully stand,
coughing and sputtering the salty water.
I look out from the shore.
It's so peaceful and beautiful.
The greenish blue colours
reflecting the bright sunlight.
The foamy water is lapping against the rocks.
A calm feeling cascades over me
and I never want to leave.
Dark, cold water pulls me
under with great force.
My senses seem to close up.
I don't know which way is up
or down.
I'm at will of the current that is contently
dragging me forward.
I attempt to stand up only
to fall down again.
With another try I successfully stand,
coughing and sputtering the salty water.
I look out from the shore.
It's so peaceful and beautiful.
The greenish blue colours
reflecting the bright sunlight.
The foamy water is lapping against the rocks.
A calm feeling cascades over me
and I never want to leave.
