Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Jan 17, 2008 13:48:09 GMT -5
******************** Chapter 1 ********************
“I’ll miss this room, this dorm, even if I was forced to come here.” Ectra said calmly as she walked over to the window ledge.
“The sunset looks different to-day.”
Her room was very small, only having a bed in the corner, a small wardrobe, and a cabinet; but there was big window near the bottom of the room with a ledge that you could sit on and watch the sunset. Ectra walked over to the side of her bed and picked up her bag, then she crotched down infront of a strange board.
“I don’t know what you are or what you do, but I guess I might as well keep you.” She said to the board.
She picked the board up and put the strap around her back.
The board was as big as her back, it was a triangle shape but the bottom of it curved a bit like a circle. It was white with blue stripes on it. It had a small strange shape at the top that looked like you had to insert something into it.
“I don’t even know where you came from; I’ve had you since as long as I can remember, like, when I was a kid.”
The she gave a serious and sad look.
“I don’t care about then. I just wish you were pink or black, at least then you’d go with my clothes and hair better.
Ectra had short black hair with strands of her fringe coming down infront of her eyes. Her bottoms were light pink combat trousers. Her top was a loose bloomer belly top. She had bright pink eyes and was 19 years old.
“Ectra, could you come down stairs for a moment please?” A voice from outside her door shouted.
“I’m coming!” Ectra yelled.
Ectra grabbed everything she had and scrambled out the door, and locked it for the very last time.
She was walking though the hall when some people poked their heads out of their rooms.
“Where you going?” A boy said rudely.
“School. What do you think?” Ectra replied.
“Which one?” Another girl asked.
“It’s something to do with this board.” Ectra replied, pointing to it.
Ectra started walking near the stairs when the boy shouted something else.
“So we’ll be seeing you around then?” He shouted.
“Nah!” Ectra laughed. “It’s a boarding school!”
The girls and boy and few others looked at each other in dismay.
“Ectra’s leaving?” They all gasped. “For good?”
“Will you hurry up Ectra!” The voice from downstairs shouted again.
Ectra shouted that she was coming and walked down a lot of stairs.
She walked down the final stair case when she came to what looked like a reception room.
It was small, with two sofas at the right side of entrance, a desk with a used computer on the left side of the entrance and some waiting chairs.
There were also two doors, one led to a chill out room with some sofas and a TV, the other led to a small cafeteria.
“What did you want me for?” Ectra asked as she was walking down the stairs.
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Constructive Chritisms is always welcome!
but i don't want any "Your story sucks" comments.
and this is my first fanfiction.
“I’ll miss this room, this dorm, even if I was forced to come here.” Ectra said calmly as she walked over to the window ledge.
“The sunset looks different to-day.”
Her room was very small, only having a bed in the corner, a small wardrobe, and a cabinet; but there was big window near the bottom of the room with a ledge that you could sit on and watch the sunset. Ectra walked over to the side of her bed and picked up her bag, then she crotched down infront of a strange board.
“I don’t know what you are or what you do, but I guess I might as well keep you.” She said to the board.
She picked the board up and put the strap around her back.
The board was as big as her back, it was a triangle shape but the bottom of it curved a bit like a circle. It was white with blue stripes on it. It had a small strange shape at the top that looked like you had to insert something into it.
“I don’t even know where you came from; I’ve had you since as long as I can remember, like, when I was a kid.”
The she gave a serious and sad look.
“I don’t care about then. I just wish you were pink or black, at least then you’d go with my clothes and hair better.
Ectra had short black hair with strands of her fringe coming down infront of her eyes. Her bottoms were light pink combat trousers. Her top was a loose bloomer belly top. She had bright pink eyes and was 19 years old.
“Ectra, could you come down stairs for a moment please?” A voice from outside her door shouted.
“I’m coming!” Ectra yelled.
Ectra grabbed everything she had and scrambled out the door, and locked it for the very last time.
She was walking though the hall when some people poked their heads out of their rooms.
“Where you going?” A boy said rudely.
“School. What do you think?” Ectra replied.
“Which one?” Another girl asked.
“It’s something to do with this board.” Ectra replied, pointing to it.
Ectra started walking near the stairs when the boy shouted something else.
“So we’ll be seeing you around then?” He shouted.
“Nah!” Ectra laughed. “It’s a boarding school!”
The girls and boy and few others looked at each other in dismay.
“Ectra’s leaving?” They all gasped. “For good?”
“Will you hurry up Ectra!” The voice from downstairs shouted again.
Ectra shouted that she was coming and walked down a lot of stairs.
She walked down the final stair case when she came to what looked like a reception room.
It was small, with two sofas at the right side of entrance, a desk with a used computer on the left side of the entrance and some waiting chairs.
There were also two doors, one led to a chill out room with some sofas and a TV, the other led to a small cafeteria.
“What did you want me for?” Ectra asked as she was walking down the stairs.
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Constructive Chritisms is always welcome!
but i don't want any "Your story sucks" comments.
and this is my first fanfiction.