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Post by *Erin* on Jan 11, 2008 16:57:09 GMT -5
Let Go Hold onto my hand I'll show you the way and the black and the white will turn into grey I'll show you things that you've never known we've come so far but just raise up your hands and leave me alone walk out of my heart and let go ------------------------------------------------- that's all i have so far. i just wrote it like 10 minutes ago. |
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ilovetaang03
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Im a secret AGENT MAN. A SECRET AGENT MAN!!!! (though im a girl)
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Post by ilovetaang03 on Jan 11, 2008 17:04:23 GMT -5
nice that is good
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Post by *Erin* on Jan 11, 2008 17:10:10 GMT -5
really, thanks!
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Jan 11, 2008 18:06:34 GMT -5
yeah, it is . you spelled gray wrong. but its nice.
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Post by *Erin* on Jan 11, 2008 18:07:27 GMT -5
well, grey can be spelled gray or grey.
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Jan 11, 2008 18:08:22 GMT -5
oh. okay then
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Post by *Erin* on Jan 15, 2008 17:33:34 GMT -5
Well, I'm glad you like it!
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Post by Dutchy on Jan 20, 2008 13:01:53 GMT -5
me as an ex-poetrywriter thinks it's good stuff ^-^
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Post by *Erin* on Jan 21, 2008 15:35:49 GMT -5
Thanks =D
I'm glad people like it!
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Post by spiritmage234 on Jan 25, 2008 6:21:46 GMT -5
Nice. Are you going to write music to go along with it?
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