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A Poem
Dec 20, 2007 15:37:23 GMT -5
Post by aangxchild on Dec 20, 2007 15:37:23 GMT -5
I Won A Gold On This On Allpoetry.com Baby SuicideI ♥ What You Think.
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ilovetaang03
Avatar Yangchen
Im a secret AGENT MAN. A SECRET AGENT MAN!!!! (though im a girl)
Posts: 1,522
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A Poem
Dec 20, 2007 15:42:52 GMT -5
Post by ilovetaang03 on Dec 20, 2007 15:42:52 GMT -5
that was good and sad i see why you won the gold *karma*
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A Poem
Dec 20, 2007 15:44:22 GMT -5
Post by aangxchild on Dec 20, 2007 15:44:22 GMT -5
Thanks for the karma friend ^^
- I like criticism guys, any to improve my writings? -
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Piro
Korra Krew
Chipmunk Queen
Nom nom nom
Posts: 14,261
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A Poem
Dec 21, 2007 15:00:07 GMT -5
Post by Piro on Dec 21, 2007 15:00:07 GMT -5
;_; Poor baby...
The rhythem of the lines is a bit odd; I'm not quite use to it, but besides that it was incredible. <3 *Karmas*
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A Poem
Dec 21, 2007 18:21:21 GMT -5
Post by aangxchild on Dec 21, 2007 18:21:21 GMT -5
^ Thats friend!
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ilovetaang03
Avatar Yangchen
Im a secret AGENT MAN. A SECRET AGENT MAN!!!! (though im a girl)
Posts: 1,522
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A Poem
Dec 21, 2007 19:04:47 GMT -5
Post by ilovetaang03 on Dec 21, 2007 19:04:47 GMT -5
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A Poem
Dec 21, 2007 21:59:31 GMT -5
Post by aangxchild on Dec 21, 2007 21:59:31 GMT -5
^ Oh yeah I forgot to read that xD I def will!
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TML
Happy Festival Mask
Thee Vampirate
Even if I disappear, I want to always be in your heart
Posts: 3,889
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A Poem
Dec 21, 2007 23:25:47 GMT -5
Post by TML on Dec 21, 2007 23:25:47 GMT -5
This is a very deep poem I feel sorry for the mother. =/
Great poem<3 *karma*
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A Poem
Dec 23, 2007 11:26:50 GMT -5
Post by aangxchild on Dec 23, 2007 11:26:50 GMT -5
I really like your story Taang. *Karmaz*
^^ Thanks
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