Post by Rogue-Angel on Nov 10, 2007 15:54:33 GMT -5
I wrote most of this story well over a year ago, and made some changes a few months afterward. Recently I have scrapped the ending, and decided to continue it in a more decent way (as I felt the end was rushed and left too many openings)...
It's rather lengthy (right now spanning 25 pages in Word), so I'll post it in pieces for easier reading
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It was a long time ago. I do not recall exactly when, for I was still young in the days of this tale, and I am far older than I look. What I do recall is that my life was troubled in those days. Troubled by mundane problems such as education and romance. I was an average young man back then, with a taste for the extraordinary. It was then that I met some friends who took me on the most extraordinary adventure of my life. But I will start at the beginning, and tell you exactly how it all came to be…
I walked into the store. It was a store unlike most others; a game store, where I played some games with a couple of friends of mine. I had been attending this particular store for a while now, and made some new friends along the way. I remember that I liked coming there. It was clean and light, and it provided a good gaming area to play in. It was here that I met Vallin, a tall young man with a rough style and a good sense of humor. We quickly befriended each other, and we had some good times there. He was fun to be around, and helpful when I was in need of something.
One day, Vallin was gaming with some other people, and I was sitting at the table. With me at the table was a young woman. Young, although older than me at the time. Older than Vallin as well, who was a few years older than me. And she was pretty. Long, dark hair and golden skin, and eyes as black as the night. She came to the store regularly as well; not to play, but to hang out with some friends that attended on a regular basis. We got to talking, and I immediately got a sense of liking her. She was kind and funny, and we talked for a long time. Her name was Verona. We quickly befriended each other as well, and she and Vallin got along fine too. Every time we were together, we talked and laughed a lot, and soon I began to develop a feeling of more than just friendship for Verona. I held this to myself, fearing she and Vallin would think it ridiculous, as she was a lot older than I was. I would keep this a secret until far later, when age would not matter anymore…
One night, Vallin, Verona and I walked the streets of the city. It was a regular Friday night, and there were many young people out having a good time. I was on my way to the station, from where I would take a bus home. Vallin and Verona came to wave me off, and would then each go home as well. We parted, and I headed for my waiting bus, when I suddenly realized I still had a necklace with me that I wanted to give to Verona. I immediately turned around and hurried in the direction in which I had seen her leave. Time would not be an issue; another bus would leave an hour later, and another one an hour after that.
I made my way through the crowd, and was lucky to see Verona round a corner. I ran after her. Once around the corner I saw she was gone. I waited a few seconds. Suddenly I saw her small stature pass under the light of a street lamp. I called her name, and ran after her. She did not stop, and rounded another corner. I hurried to follow her, and called again. Once I rounded the corner, I found myself in a dark alley. I could see little; only the pale illumination of a light in a doorway, but that soon closed as well. I walked up to the door. I raised my hand to knock, but raised voices inside stayed my hand.
“…you don’t like him?”
It Was Verona’s voice. It sounded agitated, with a faint undertone of sadness. It was replied by a heavier voice; Vallin, I knew. This surprised me, as they never told me they lived together. But I had no time to wonder, because the conversation continued.
“Yes, I like him too, but we need someone. It has been too long since we had anything!”
He sounded angry and desperate.
- “We can always just pick someone off the streets. I can’t kill him, not anymore.”
“You know we can’t. Our victim must be willing.”
- “Oh come on, we’ve done it before. I can get anybody in here in no time.”
“Like that drunk guy?! I could smell him a mile away, and he had so much alcohol in his blood that I almost got drunk myself!”
- “At least it’s better than…”
“I don’t want you walking around the city like some lover girl.” Interrupted Vallin. His tone had changed into something I did not recognize at the moment.
“We’ve shared this curse together for so long, I can’t let you do that.”
- “But if we don’t, we will perish. And I won’t drink his blood, I just can’t.”
At this point I froze. Drink blood? Who’s blood? Mine? I did not understand. Again I was left little time to wonder, as Vallin spoke again.
“Very well. I’ll look for someone else.”
- “Thank you…”
“Here, take some of this. It’s the last of the pig’s blood.”
- “I’ll be glad to taste human blood again, this stuff just tastes awful…”
I could hear no more. A door slammed shut, and the voices were gone. Finally I had time to think about what I had just heard. I returned to the station and took the bus home. I went to bed, but I could not sleep. The conversation was repeating itself over and over again, and I was pondering its meaning. I thought of many things, but eventually came to a most illogical conclusion. Vallin and Verona were Vampires…
When I met them again a week later, I was unsure of what to do. I did not dare to bring up the subject, afraid of their reactions. Afraid they would kill me right then and there. I was confused and distant all day, and that could not go unnoticed. That evening Verona and I chatted over the internet, and she asked me what was wrong. I made up a silly excuse of some school problems, but I could not convince her. She kept asking, but I just could not tell her. Not yet.
I spent pretty much that whole week thinking of a way of telling them, without upsetting them. Night after night I was awake, thinking of the best way to tell them. Or if I should tell it at all. The day before I would meet them again I got an idea, and what I did then would shape my future forever.
That morning I waited until everybody had left the house. I found an empty bottle, and cleaned it well. I put a funnel on it, and readied some band-aids. My arm hovered over the funnel, but I hesitated. I took a sharp knife, and placed it against the raised arm. The sharp edge was piercing my skin. I swallowed the fear away, and with one quick motion I sliced open my arm. A burning pain told me there was no going back now. I closed my eyes and fought off a wave of nausea. I felt the blood trickle off my arm into the funnel.
I don’t remember how long I had stood there. I waited until the bottle was full, and then tended the self-inflicted wound. I was dizzy and nauseous, and I knew I had lost a lot of blood, but it was for a good cause. I sealed the bottle, and put it in my bag. I hurried to the bus stop, and waited for the bus to take me to the city…
I arrived at the store a bit later than normal. Vallin and Verona were not there yet. I sat down. The nausea was gone, but I was still very dizzy. It wasn’t long before Vallin came in. He looked at me with worry in his eyes.
“You look sick… Are you ok?”
- “Yeah, I’m fine. Just a bit dizzy, that’s all…”
“How come?”
- “I spray painted some miniatures indoors this morning, and didn’t get it ventilated.”
I lied, and hoped he didn’t notice.
“What’s with the band-aid on your arm?”
- “Cooking accident yesterday, the knife slipped from my hand…”
Another lie, but he bought it.
“Be more careful next time, and open a few windows when you’re spraying inside.” He said with a smile. He sat down and started painting some miniatures, and we talked for about an hour, until Verona came in. She too asked me about the band-aid, and she too bought the lie. She did not look well, but I did not dare to ask what was wrong, although I had my suspicions. I was quite nervous, but did my best not to show. The afternoon went by as normal, and closing time passed. Vallin, Verona and I headed for the station again. We said goodbye again, but instead of heading for my bus, I headed after Verona. I caught her before she left the station, and she was surprised to see me still there.
“Hey, is there a problem?” She asked.
- “No… not really. I just need to talk to you…”
“Sure, what’s the matter?”
- “Not here, please. Can’t we go somewhere private?”
“Well… My apartment is nearby…”
- “Thank you, that would be nice…”
The thought of going to her home was making me even more nervous than I already was. I didn’t know if Vallin would be there. I hoped he was elsewhere, but I was almost certain he would be there too.
We walked in silence through the busy streets, and arrived in the alley. A cold breeze had set in, and black clouds were veiling the stars. The alley seemed even more intimidating than it had the first time I was there. A shiver ran down my spine.
“We’re almost there” said Verona, as if she had sensed it. She walked up to the door where I had been listening.
“Wait here a minute.”
I nodded, and she went in. It seemed like an eternity, but finally she let me in.
“Sorry about that, I had to check if my friend was home.”
- “Vallin…?” I asked, my voice trembling a bit.
“Yeah, how did you…”
- “Lucky guess, I think.... Never mind.”
“Right…”
She took my coat and led me into a small, warm living room. There was little furniture; a couch, two chairs, a small table, and a television set with VCR and a game console placed on the floor.
“Can I get you something to drink?” She asked. She sounded casual, but I thought I heard concern as well.
- “Just water, please.”
She went through a door; to the kitchen I guessed. I took the bottle with blood from my bag and put it on the table. I took a seat on the couch and smiled when she came in with my glass of water. She stopped and looked in surprise at the bottle on the table.
“What is that?” She asked suspiciously.
- “That’s what I wanted to talk to you about…”
She put the glass of water next to the bottle, and sat down on a chair.
“So what is the problem?”
- “Well… It happened two weeks ago, after I left you and Vallin…”
I hesitated.
“Well?”
- “I wanted to tell you something then, so I came back after you. I called your name, but you didn’t hear me, so I followed you here…”
Her face was expressionless, but her eyes betrayed something like surprise.
- “I wanted to knock on the door, but then I overheard you and Vallin talking about…”
“Listen, it’s not what you think!” she sounded defensive. Afraid maybe.
- “Then what am I thinking? And if it isn’t that, what is it then?”
She looked at me. Sadness had taken over her face.
“I’d hoped you wouldn’t find out…”
- “So you are vampires? They do really exist?”
“Y-yes… Vallin and I are vampires…”
- “And you wanted to drink my blood?”
“Initially, yes, But…”
- “But that would kill me?” I interrupted, perhaps a little harshly.
“Y-yes…”
I looked at her, afraid. She looked back, and a tear rolled down her cheek.
“We won’t kill you, we have found someone else…”
- “I know…” I said, wondering who it might have been. “I heard Vallin say he would.”
For at least an hour we just sat there, just looking at eachother. Finally she broke the silence.
“If this means you don’t want to see us again, I understand…” She sounded even more sad than before.
- “No, I…” I hesitated. “I want you to drink from me.”
She looked at me surprised and amazed.
“Is the bottle…”
- “Yes, it’s blood. My blood…”
She looked at the bottle.
“And you are giving it to me?”
- “To you, and Vallin…”
“Why?”
- “I hear it’s better than pig’s blood.” I tried to force a smile, in vain.
“It… It is…”
We sat quiet again for a long time, I don’t know exactly how long. Without a word, I stood up and left the apartment. Outside I took a deep breath. I looked around for no reason, and headed off to the station. The first step had been made…
I did not hear anything from Verona or Vallin for a while. They did not appear on the internet, and they were not in the store then next Friday. I feared they had left the city forever. I had filled up another bottle of blood for them, but it sat untouched in the back of my refrigerator, hidden from the rest of my family. Then, on Wednesday, I received an e-mail from Verona.
‘Hi,
I’m sorry I didn’t say anything for such a long time, but as you can imagine I’ve had a lot to think about. I have told Vallin about what you did, and while we are very grateful, we both don’t really know what to do with it. We would like to talk to you about it, so maybe we can meet at my place Friday night?
I hope you’ll be there.
Verona’
It's rather lengthy (right now spanning 25 pages in Word), so I'll post it in pieces for easier reading
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It was a long time ago. I do not recall exactly when, for I was still young in the days of this tale, and I am far older than I look. What I do recall is that my life was troubled in those days. Troubled by mundane problems such as education and romance. I was an average young man back then, with a taste for the extraordinary. It was then that I met some friends who took me on the most extraordinary adventure of my life. But I will start at the beginning, and tell you exactly how it all came to be…
I walked into the store. It was a store unlike most others; a game store, where I played some games with a couple of friends of mine. I had been attending this particular store for a while now, and made some new friends along the way. I remember that I liked coming there. It was clean and light, and it provided a good gaming area to play in. It was here that I met Vallin, a tall young man with a rough style and a good sense of humor. We quickly befriended each other, and we had some good times there. He was fun to be around, and helpful when I was in need of something.
One day, Vallin was gaming with some other people, and I was sitting at the table. With me at the table was a young woman. Young, although older than me at the time. Older than Vallin as well, who was a few years older than me. And she was pretty. Long, dark hair and golden skin, and eyes as black as the night. She came to the store regularly as well; not to play, but to hang out with some friends that attended on a regular basis. We got to talking, and I immediately got a sense of liking her. She was kind and funny, and we talked for a long time. Her name was Verona. We quickly befriended each other as well, and she and Vallin got along fine too. Every time we were together, we talked and laughed a lot, and soon I began to develop a feeling of more than just friendship for Verona. I held this to myself, fearing she and Vallin would think it ridiculous, as she was a lot older than I was. I would keep this a secret until far later, when age would not matter anymore…
One night, Vallin, Verona and I walked the streets of the city. It was a regular Friday night, and there were many young people out having a good time. I was on my way to the station, from where I would take a bus home. Vallin and Verona came to wave me off, and would then each go home as well. We parted, and I headed for my waiting bus, when I suddenly realized I still had a necklace with me that I wanted to give to Verona. I immediately turned around and hurried in the direction in which I had seen her leave. Time would not be an issue; another bus would leave an hour later, and another one an hour after that.
I made my way through the crowd, and was lucky to see Verona round a corner. I ran after her. Once around the corner I saw she was gone. I waited a few seconds. Suddenly I saw her small stature pass under the light of a street lamp. I called her name, and ran after her. She did not stop, and rounded another corner. I hurried to follow her, and called again. Once I rounded the corner, I found myself in a dark alley. I could see little; only the pale illumination of a light in a doorway, but that soon closed as well. I walked up to the door. I raised my hand to knock, but raised voices inside stayed my hand.
“…you don’t like him?”
It Was Verona’s voice. It sounded agitated, with a faint undertone of sadness. It was replied by a heavier voice; Vallin, I knew. This surprised me, as they never told me they lived together. But I had no time to wonder, because the conversation continued.
“Yes, I like him too, but we need someone. It has been too long since we had anything!”
He sounded angry and desperate.
- “We can always just pick someone off the streets. I can’t kill him, not anymore.”
“You know we can’t. Our victim must be willing.”
- “Oh come on, we’ve done it before. I can get anybody in here in no time.”
“Like that drunk guy?! I could smell him a mile away, and he had so much alcohol in his blood that I almost got drunk myself!”
- “At least it’s better than…”
“I don’t want you walking around the city like some lover girl.” Interrupted Vallin. His tone had changed into something I did not recognize at the moment.
“We’ve shared this curse together for so long, I can’t let you do that.”
- “But if we don’t, we will perish. And I won’t drink his blood, I just can’t.”
At this point I froze. Drink blood? Who’s blood? Mine? I did not understand. Again I was left little time to wonder, as Vallin spoke again.
“Very well. I’ll look for someone else.”
- “Thank you…”
“Here, take some of this. It’s the last of the pig’s blood.”
- “I’ll be glad to taste human blood again, this stuff just tastes awful…”
I could hear no more. A door slammed shut, and the voices were gone. Finally I had time to think about what I had just heard. I returned to the station and took the bus home. I went to bed, but I could not sleep. The conversation was repeating itself over and over again, and I was pondering its meaning. I thought of many things, but eventually came to a most illogical conclusion. Vallin and Verona were Vampires…
When I met them again a week later, I was unsure of what to do. I did not dare to bring up the subject, afraid of their reactions. Afraid they would kill me right then and there. I was confused and distant all day, and that could not go unnoticed. That evening Verona and I chatted over the internet, and she asked me what was wrong. I made up a silly excuse of some school problems, but I could not convince her. She kept asking, but I just could not tell her. Not yet.
I spent pretty much that whole week thinking of a way of telling them, without upsetting them. Night after night I was awake, thinking of the best way to tell them. Or if I should tell it at all. The day before I would meet them again I got an idea, and what I did then would shape my future forever.
That morning I waited until everybody had left the house. I found an empty bottle, and cleaned it well. I put a funnel on it, and readied some band-aids. My arm hovered over the funnel, but I hesitated. I took a sharp knife, and placed it against the raised arm. The sharp edge was piercing my skin. I swallowed the fear away, and with one quick motion I sliced open my arm. A burning pain told me there was no going back now. I closed my eyes and fought off a wave of nausea. I felt the blood trickle off my arm into the funnel.
I don’t remember how long I had stood there. I waited until the bottle was full, and then tended the self-inflicted wound. I was dizzy and nauseous, and I knew I had lost a lot of blood, but it was for a good cause. I sealed the bottle, and put it in my bag. I hurried to the bus stop, and waited for the bus to take me to the city…
I arrived at the store a bit later than normal. Vallin and Verona were not there yet. I sat down. The nausea was gone, but I was still very dizzy. It wasn’t long before Vallin came in. He looked at me with worry in his eyes.
“You look sick… Are you ok?”
- “Yeah, I’m fine. Just a bit dizzy, that’s all…”
“How come?”
- “I spray painted some miniatures indoors this morning, and didn’t get it ventilated.”
I lied, and hoped he didn’t notice.
“What’s with the band-aid on your arm?”
- “Cooking accident yesterday, the knife slipped from my hand…”
Another lie, but he bought it.
“Be more careful next time, and open a few windows when you’re spraying inside.” He said with a smile. He sat down and started painting some miniatures, and we talked for about an hour, until Verona came in. She too asked me about the band-aid, and she too bought the lie. She did not look well, but I did not dare to ask what was wrong, although I had my suspicions. I was quite nervous, but did my best not to show. The afternoon went by as normal, and closing time passed. Vallin, Verona and I headed for the station again. We said goodbye again, but instead of heading for my bus, I headed after Verona. I caught her before she left the station, and she was surprised to see me still there.
“Hey, is there a problem?” She asked.
- “No… not really. I just need to talk to you…”
“Sure, what’s the matter?”
- “Not here, please. Can’t we go somewhere private?”
“Well… My apartment is nearby…”
- “Thank you, that would be nice…”
The thought of going to her home was making me even more nervous than I already was. I didn’t know if Vallin would be there. I hoped he was elsewhere, but I was almost certain he would be there too.
We walked in silence through the busy streets, and arrived in the alley. A cold breeze had set in, and black clouds were veiling the stars. The alley seemed even more intimidating than it had the first time I was there. A shiver ran down my spine.
“We’re almost there” said Verona, as if she had sensed it. She walked up to the door where I had been listening.
“Wait here a minute.”
I nodded, and she went in. It seemed like an eternity, but finally she let me in.
“Sorry about that, I had to check if my friend was home.”
- “Vallin…?” I asked, my voice trembling a bit.
“Yeah, how did you…”
- “Lucky guess, I think.... Never mind.”
“Right…”
She took my coat and led me into a small, warm living room. There was little furniture; a couch, two chairs, a small table, and a television set with VCR and a game console placed on the floor.
“Can I get you something to drink?” She asked. She sounded casual, but I thought I heard concern as well.
- “Just water, please.”
She went through a door; to the kitchen I guessed. I took the bottle with blood from my bag and put it on the table. I took a seat on the couch and smiled when she came in with my glass of water. She stopped and looked in surprise at the bottle on the table.
“What is that?” She asked suspiciously.
- “That’s what I wanted to talk to you about…”
She put the glass of water next to the bottle, and sat down on a chair.
“So what is the problem?”
- “Well… It happened two weeks ago, after I left you and Vallin…”
I hesitated.
“Well?”
- “I wanted to tell you something then, so I came back after you. I called your name, but you didn’t hear me, so I followed you here…”
Her face was expressionless, but her eyes betrayed something like surprise.
- “I wanted to knock on the door, but then I overheard you and Vallin talking about…”
“Listen, it’s not what you think!” she sounded defensive. Afraid maybe.
- “Then what am I thinking? And if it isn’t that, what is it then?”
She looked at me. Sadness had taken over her face.
“I’d hoped you wouldn’t find out…”
- “So you are vampires? They do really exist?”
“Y-yes… Vallin and I are vampires…”
- “And you wanted to drink my blood?”
“Initially, yes, But…”
- “But that would kill me?” I interrupted, perhaps a little harshly.
“Y-yes…”
I looked at her, afraid. She looked back, and a tear rolled down her cheek.
“We won’t kill you, we have found someone else…”
- “I know…” I said, wondering who it might have been. “I heard Vallin say he would.”
For at least an hour we just sat there, just looking at eachother. Finally she broke the silence.
“If this means you don’t want to see us again, I understand…” She sounded even more sad than before.
- “No, I…” I hesitated. “I want you to drink from me.”
She looked at me surprised and amazed.
“Is the bottle…”
- “Yes, it’s blood. My blood…”
She looked at the bottle.
“And you are giving it to me?”
- “To you, and Vallin…”
“Why?”
- “I hear it’s better than pig’s blood.” I tried to force a smile, in vain.
“It… It is…”
We sat quiet again for a long time, I don’t know exactly how long. Without a word, I stood up and left the apartment. Outside I took a deep breath. I looked around for no reason, and headed off to the station. The first step had been made…
I did not hear anything from Verona or Vallin for a while. They did not appear on the internet, and they were not in the store then next Friday. I feared they had left the city forever. I had filled up another bottle of blood for them, but it sat untouched in the back of my refrigerator, hidden from the rest of my family. Then, on Wednesday, I received an e-mail from Verona.
‘Hi,
I’m sorry I didn’t say anything for such a long time, but as you can imagine I’ve had a lot to think about. I have told Vallin about what you did, and while we are very grateful, we both don’t really know what to do with it. We would like to talk to you about it, so maybe we can meet at my place Friday night?
I hope you’ll be there.
Verona’