Post by Moonmask on May 27, 2008 20:28:42 GMT -5
It's not very good, but here's a poem I wrote today. Please give advice if you can, I want to be a better writer.
Dying Inside
If love is the most joyous feeling,
Why must it be the most cruel?
There’s a storm inside my heart
An angry, raging torrent
I once heard hearts could break
I was never told they could shatter.
Glass explodes, its sharp jagged edges
Cut deep into my soul.
Why did you do this to me?
All I wanted was your love.
I didn’t know it was too much to ask
I’m sorry I’m so greedy.
My heartbeat’s fading to nothing
I think I’m dying inside…
And as darkness falls upon me
The last thing I see is you.
If love is the most joyous feeling,
Why must it be the most cruel?
There’s a storm inside my heart
An angry, raging torrent
I once heard hearts could break
I was never told they could shatter.
Glass explodes, its sharp jagged edges
Cut deep into my soul.
Why did you do this to me?
All I wanted was your love.
I didn’t know it was too much to ask
I’m sorry I’m so greedy.
My heartbeat’s fading to nothing
I think I’m dying inside…
And as darkness falls upon me
The last thing I see is you.
